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Read MoreHow do fallen angels form?Are they born like so or even torn?Or are they made feel foul? Maybe they used to be friendly and nice.Until people pushed them to the edge and rolled the dice.They say fallen angels are a...
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Read MoreIn the slums of East London's streetsAn unsolved mystery, a puzzle incompleteA murder spree of blood and painMutilated abdomens, a madman insaneFrom the dark shadows an evil lurksA sinister man with perversive quirksAnd a cunning tongue, he's a smooth...
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This gave me a Sweeney Todd vibe. This is good
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I did some research on jack the ripper..never knew his other nickname was leather apron..thanks for comment
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I didn’t know that either. That is interesting
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I did some research on jack the ripper..never knew his other nickname was leather apron..thanks for comment
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Me neither..the power of research
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But def in a funk..haven’t had time to write..
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“The jewes are the people that will not be blamed for nothing.” There was a lot of prejudice against jews in Whitechapel and the entire east end in 1888. I knew what this was about as soon as I saw the title. He left a leather apron behind after one of the killings. Possible Annie Chapman, not sure. Mary Kelly got it the worst, he had plenty of time with her. Excellent poem with great rhymes . I’m glad I read this.
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Thanks for commenting..I’m glad you stumbled across it..and seems like you have a lot of knowledge about the history of this..I actually want to dive deeper and learn more..I never knew all this stuff..and how many victims there were..
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Powerful work.
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thank you graciously dearest Thomas this one is out there I’m you felt it💕
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Read MoreThe moon on her dress corruscates my fingers with cobalt shards of icebergs, rolling fingerprints beyond fabric Tidal hair breaches the breakers down her back, the last waterfall on earth weeps for every desire lost at sea Catching the pearls of her eyes in trawls of my dilated bleeding, if...
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You make me think…
It’s cool, I’m good at it!
I enjoy the complexity of your writes. The vocabulary. The nuanced messages. Even, a word I never knew until you shared it.
So thank you for the enhanced ability of your writes. It makes me stronger by reading them. And enjoying them.-
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As always, you are too kind Mark. I don’t miss many from DU, but you are definitely on the missed list.
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This truly shows your intelligence and talent. Very supernacular.
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Ha. I’m loving “supernacular” Sounds a bit like an Oasis song. Thank you A.
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I agree with previous commentors on the talent.
I like the analogies presented in this write.
Especially fond of the last stanza…reading this makes me feel like I saw her memories
just before they entombed her under the cathedral floor.j.
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Thank you.
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This is beautiful. Favorite stanza
” Fallen angels are made,not born.
Made of feelings oh so torn.
And negativity slowly form.”