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    Memory

    Blood drips slow from the ceilingOh it tastes like rustHead's poundingSirens screamingMy mind’s combustCops poundingThe door’s caving in“Where were you” they shout“where’ve you been”I’m blankI’m hollowThe reel won’t playNo pastNo shadowJust a foggy grayIron tastes like memoryBitter and coldQuestions...

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    • This has a surreal aspect to it. The iron tasting like memory is brilliant. Mind sees blood

    • Brilliantly penned, Drieks. Into the book it belongs! Phenomenal lyrics my friend especially that chorus, love the drive of the musical arrangement, the beat is almost trance like. Excellent work. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Thank you Damian! 🙏🏻

    • This is awesome! I’m sorry I’m late to this post!!
      Just wow!!

    • I can’t thank you enough for your beautiful words. I am pretty bad at accepting compliments so bare with me.
      Also, english is not my native language so if I say something that doesn’t make much sense, I apologize!

      But thank you for saying all this to me. Truly.
      And no, I do not realize I help people through my words but it is really nice to think I can/do.

      ❤️

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    Beneath Her Pretty Dress

    Beneath Her Pretty Dress   Now isn’t that truly something else something wonderful no less .. While no longer taught and flat but lightly bowed and more convex perhaps .. I hereby do confess I am already very much in love with what has just begun to show .. But for...

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    • It is nice to read that a man still appreciates a woman’s maturing body

      • Bless you Fia .. I know I surely do and always shall but the one in question has a baby growing inside her .. Neville

    • One of my favorite places is beneath a pretty woman’s dress. 🙂

    • I am certain that every man is completely agreeing with You here, what a playful Neville!

      • Bless You dear Light💕.. this little scribble was conceived within moments of my being told the young lady in question was going to have a baby .. it’s an old poem now .. a bit like me 😎⭐💛🌻👍

        • Wow! It’s about “baby” and giving life, You sure have the way with words lol. I deeply appreciate this poem in a different way now! Bless You 💕 Forever Young Neville 😎

    • A mature was to admire a woman!

    • I snickered and thought unclean thoughts like a school boy when first read, completely missing the lady’s age, sidelined, as I was, by the niceties behind that dress. Now aware that she might not be young and that I’m no longer 12, my motor is still revving. Summer dresses are just so fine!

    • Really beautiful piece, showing lovely appreciation for another. I enjoyed this.

    • Many thanks for stopping by and checking out my little scribble .. so very much appreciated .. Neville

    • The passion and play of this is an utter delight. I love wearing dresses. They’re a one and done, no fuss picking something to match. It’s the feel of them I think most women prefer. The feminine quality that stirs a man’s imagination…so well captured here.

    • I’ll take it, that’ll do nicely .. Very nicely indeed .. Cheers & Many thanks Kelly .. Neville 🍷

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    His Gaze

    Sometimes I look into his gaze and wonder.Could his true eyes be blue or green?Brown,or a color evergreen? His gaze is a whole another world.A whole,different dimension.Where everyone ascends. And there is no sadness or expense.There everything is free and everyone...

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    Wicked Woman

    somethin’ bout the way she movessubtle yet so attractivethe innocent way her body groovesshe’s a hurricane burning radioactiveseductive eyes that mystifymakes you wanna fucking danceshe’s the spider, yeah you’re the flycaught up in a web of circumstance… don’t turn your...

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    • That’s one helluva wicked woman you just poemed Damian .. way to go my friend .. if you would kindly send me her coordinates I will stop by and convey my regards .. Neville

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. That she was, her coordinates were lost in the late 90’s. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I love this, Damian. It reminds me of “Witchy Woman” by the Eagles. 🌾🕊️

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. That’s high praise, and good company. What a lovely comment. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I wish I could hear the music behind it. Perhaps someday we’ll get a glimpse of your energy and fire within your lyrics. Good one, Damian.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Well through GarageBand and Logic Pro, I’m working on that. lol. The problem with not being able to play an instrument, is that it only leaves a few options. So I’m working on a solo album to give these old lyrics a home, there will be new lyrics as well. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I sincerely hope this one makes the album cut! I so badly wanna hear it! It moves like a snake, undulates down the page. Perfect for the lyrics, my friend

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with lyrics my friend. I plan on this one making the cut, I’ve always wanted “Wicked” to have music again. It had music in 97, but it was never recorded. Thanks for your continued support it means a lot to me. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • This is fire, friend. Everyone loves a wicked woman.

    • I can hear this playing in some club… maybe even a strip club!? LOL
      It has a great beat to the lines. It’s also very entertaining! Awesome job Damian.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I try, I always write to the beat in my head. Maybe a strip club, or some other place where human beings gather. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Killer piece dude. You’re a talent my friend.

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