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Read MoreIn the yard, in the fogof a heavy downpour,two toddlers wore rainlike tight-fitted jeanswhich clung to them soggyin moments of gleewith a spin and a spreethey giggled and laughed,a thousand thuds,as each soaking thudof their shiny red bootsforced a...
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I did it in high school one day with a friend. We kicked a can in the front of the school in pouring rain and kids were watching from the windows. He’s since passed away so I’ll always remember that day being glad we did it. 🙂
And yeah, us kids also ran in yards in the rain leaving our parents aghast. lol
Thank you for the comment, Adelly. 🙂
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childhood was full of such days for me I’ve always been an outdoor person this is beautiful Tim ❤️
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Thanks so much Crimsin. I appreciate your comment. 🙂
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Powerful. So true.
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Thanks Thomas.
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Beautifully penned, Tim. Excellent write with a nostalgic flavor my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian.
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Time you word painted a vision of innocence here. I am enchanted by the scene you wrote so well. You captured the joy of childhood wonderfully and i enjoyed this much.
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Read MoreI burn with frost, a freezing flame A blaze that chills but feels the same I melt the ice to make a spark Yet leave the wood forever dark My heat is cold, my light is numb A fire that makes the senses dumb I...
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It’s so cold it burns. The rhyme scheme is excellent.
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Thanks Fia..appreciate the comment..appreciate you reading
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Read MorePoetry is madness A ritual I do, but do not know.A night that conquers,Drunks me to helplessness.And it kills shame,Guilt. It hits you like an exploding racket.It shoots out you naked.
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I like this, and the title is perfect.
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Thank you Fia.
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We also thought of this as beyond a first date when you’re invited inside and beyond a good night kiss. Tight
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Thank you. 🙂
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Well, she could not get you out of her mind. It’s funny how that happens you always think of the missed opportunities. This had me engaged from beginning to end.
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Thanks.
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Oh! This reminds me of when me and my brother would play in the rain when we were kids.
In the front yard we didn’t have stickers so we would be barefoot. Lol
Good times!