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Read Morebeauty…is in the eye of the beholder…so they say…“as if” my thoughts cajoled herbrilliant…is the glow of her presence for all to seeexuding a celestial essencetonight…an umbra accentuates her pirouettefor one dance onlya stunningly deep red silhouette shimmering…is the veil...
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Damian, thanks for the appreciative welcome. I see you have posted a lot of material on your page. I look forward to reading some of your work.
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I like the way you start off every stanza with a single word and build on it. Lovely work. Welcome to Stars Rite
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Fia, thanks for the welcome. Your words are kind. Yes, the single words are different than how others would write their poetry. For me, it creates a pause to help focus on the feelings and emotions I’m trying to express.
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Chère A.,
Welcome to this (Fia’s) corner of heaven.
Your verse form is very suitable for setting to music. To use as lyrics I mean.Maybe…
In the future?But for now, what a way to start!
If you’re American: thank you.
In all other cases: keep them coming please.Kind regards, Gus
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Duhsjaak, thanks for your welcoming comments. Most of my writing is based on interpretation of musical melody and song lyrics. I’ve never actually thought of my poems as song before. That is an interesting consideration.
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I thourghly enjoyed this and welcome to Stars.
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Atticus, thanks for your welcome. I am happy you enjoyed my celestial interpretation of the Eagles song.
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The corner is always dimmed
as if he left the shadow behind.Yes, same old song. Nice poem
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Yes Fia same old song. Take care.
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Powerfully penned, Amethyste. Keen observation my friend. Loneliness is the main character in a lot of songs. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Nice to hear from you Damian. Have a good day today.
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Beautifully penned, Angel. Excellent write my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.
Damian