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Read MoreIn your depths, I am a shadow soullicking at a flame I can't fathomFate is cruel and did not allow My passion quelled out of necessityProvocation denied and repressedYou graze my sexual soulprovoking my lustbuilding it until bare, I squirm My...
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thank you graciously dearest Damian 💕
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My crime, tempting to read your work, Brenda. Lovely poetess and love the title. Bravo!
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thank you graciously I love you comment Daniel 💕
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thank you graciously beautiful one 💕
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Lyrics of wisdom…
Check spelling on ‘strength’ first line and ‘through’ in the 3rd stanza.
Your meter for this piece is strong, the primary poetic element. It is assertive and authoritative.-
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Thank you for correcting the spelling! I appreciate it ⚘️
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Beautifully penned, Jade. This was a wise and uplifting read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian⚘️
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💜⚘️
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An insightful write! Well done “)
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Thank you for your kind words! ⚘️
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Great insight. Totally diggin this vibe
Naaj
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Thank you kindly ⚘️
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Read MoreAnother day has come and gone without me being inside you, without you feeling the threat of an animal waiting to devour you? Here I am, still potent,still hungry, still stalking you,my prey. I could force myself on you. But I'm an animal not a sinner. Why...
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You’re a gem…..funny,clever and a bit sexy….😜
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Ok ok …. sizzling hot.
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Read More24 hours ago our bed held only the ghost of my shape & you breathed like nothing was missing i wanted to shout from the spare room (i’m not there i’m not there) but sleep had stitched your eyes shut with trust the saddest thing was not that i left but that you didn’t feel the cold where i wasn’t or if you...
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This is heart breakingly …familiar
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Fortunately for me it doesn’t happen very often but once upon a time she would have come looking for me….. 😔
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Thanks for reading and the comment.
I guess it’s the sad reality of ageing when libidos are not in sync anymore.
It is sad but in an other way it’s kind of lovely that we started a fire,kept it going for years and now there’s not much fuel left to keep it alight…..lol -
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You’re very sweet and dare I say quite clever with words.😘
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This piece is achingly deep. Thank you for sharing.
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Thanks for reading and the kind comments.
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. A great spill my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian