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A lovely write. Well written with some great rhymes!
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Read MoreThe Terror In The Community. The community was designed as a euphoric cornucopia of green, lush plant life, all underwater in a 25-gallon tank. Introducing into this tank were three. You heard me, three fanciful goldfish. One was an Oranda that...
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Cleverly penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend, I always enjoy your amazing storytelling. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. Maurice is going to have my blood pressure up. lol
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Fantastic. Love it, Fia.
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Thank you Atticus;))
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Why not just flush Maurice?? Get rid of the non team player! maybe he can go rule the sewers or something, LOL.
I’m just being logical! Or put his ass with a male Beta (Japanese Fighting fish). No more Maurice!-
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lol I have a friend that said I should send Maurice to meet Davey Jones Locker in the toilet too. lmao. Thank you Stxian
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Chère F.,
I’d love it if this would find you mellow and at ease, just before the weekend.I’ve read your poem and I don’t understand it.
blunt Dutch analysis.
But I love the kiss by Brancusi (singer museum Leiden the Netherlands) without understanding too.
I love some of Rothko’s work too.Understanding isn’t always about what you/I can grasp at any time!
I love this write of yours and I think it’s raking me a little more time.So:
Please be patient with me!
I’ll be back, I promise! Have a very nice weekend…..
Warm Waving from a distance, Gus-
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Thank you Gus, its not a poem its a short story. I have a goldfish that is a bully. lol Have a good weekend.
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Cook Maurice and have him as an appetizer. He’d be with you forever. Great story Fia.
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Lmao no way. thank you Vision
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This starts playful but slowly tightens into something darker.
Power and cruelty don’t need much space to show themselves.-
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That is so true Thomas. Thank you
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Clean slate works also. Lol
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Maurice met an untimely death. lol Thank you CasketSharpe;))
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I think you’ll need to build a little underwater jail and keep Maurice there as punishment.
This was great, yes it’s frustrating that your fishes kept dying but I love how you told this story not just as the observer but almost like a deity that you had power but they kept dying on you while you weren’t looking.
Awesome work.
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Read MoreI checked the clockIt was past midnightTwo hours had passed without me realising itAnd an hour weighs ten hours thesegrim daysA fleeting happy momentSomething you want to catchLike butteflies with blue armsWhen you are a childYou gave it to...
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Beautifully penned, Amethyste. Excellent write my friend, always enjoy your observations. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. Hugs and love.
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I love the way you write ❤️
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Thank you dear. Your comment made my day. 🙂
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Read MoreBitternessYour life in bitternessHatredHate consumes your every emotionYour soul is engulfed with blacknessPutting your guilt upon othersHate takes over your lifeHate takes over your mindYou feel your life slip awayWhen you live your life in hateYou seal your destinyYou've...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. This was an excellent fucking write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Cool. Glad you enjoyed this piece Damian.
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Hate hollows the spirit until nothing remains but the echo of its own ruin.
Only love, when remembered, can unseal what the heart has already buried.-
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Your words always shine PAR. Thank you for this feedback.
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This reads like a moral reckoning set to a slow, steady drumbeat.
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Appreciate the feedback Thomas. Thank you!
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Read MoreAs odd as it may seemThis reality is only a dreamLike millions of insects freezing to deathSociopathic is my mathematicsThe final answer is zeroC'mon, you'd love to be the superhero The processed foods of your laborsHave decayed into diseaseAnd the...
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Hauntingly penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian.
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Ahh the processed food we consumed is decayed in desease…why was I eating when I read this. Good one. Good visuals
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Stay away from processed foods. They will debilitate you and eventually kill you! Thanks Fia!
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The cinderella comparison had me saying aww even though I was smiling while reading this piece