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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreUnjust jealousyhas taken over meI cannot believethat you cannot seethat he is for me I will channel this rageas my pen flies across the pageThere is no smoke or sageThat will bless what is coming in spades You need to understandWhen...
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Thank you, Damian 😊
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hello beautiful Fia this is perfectly written and it’s true older women no more how to please a man I like an older man myself combined with a little arrogance great write ❤️
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🩷thank you crimsin
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Love the flow first. but also the attitude of claiming what’s yours. Tight
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Thank you Me 😉
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This is honest, real and demanding. Well said Fia.
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Thank you, Vision;)
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That flow and to the point understanding hit straight on
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Thank you, CasketSharpe;))
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I love this one, Fia.
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Thank you Atticus
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This is raw possession and feral confidence on the page—jealousy sharpened into language instead of apology.
It’s confrontational without flinching, and the voice knows exactly how far to lean into menace before it becomes theater.-
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Thank you, Thomas
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I’m digging the attitude and confidence. Telling it like it is in your own sense of style.
Back off my man! This is fun to read and had a swag urban feel to it.
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Haha Thank you. I guess I was really feeling this piece
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That’s tellen her. When Fia lays down the law, watch out! lol Nice one. 🙂
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Well, thank you, Tim.
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“There’s something that comes with age and time” there is something about this line that speaks with stoicism and control which also lets a little leeway to catch a case.
I loved the underlying theme, she may try tempt him but you have his heart.
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Thank you, Wally;))
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This is a subtle warning huh. LOL.
You make it seem “nice” because it rhymes. But so does “sharp” and “harp” -which is what they will be playing when you finish them off. LOL.
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Thank you, Styxian;)) Not so subtle I guess
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Thomas W. Case wrote a new post
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Read MoreI sit on the tattered couch, watching the clock tick like a slow son of a bitch in an assembly line, waiting for quitting time. Fingers tapping on the armrest, heart thumping a slow and patient drum to Van Morrison’s Moondance spilling from the speakers. Shadows converge on the...
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Passionately penned, Thomas. Beautiful write my friend, can’t go wrong with Van Morrison. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks, my friend.
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This has a nice build to it Thomas. The wait and the mind, taking you where the body wants to go.
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Thank you.
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A lovely detailed piece. As Damian also said, Van Morrison is the king! GREAT!
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Thanks
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Bloomin brill good sir and I most definitely aint talking fish .. Neville
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Thank you, my friend.
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Well, damn. From the tedium of the ticking clock to the eruption of passion upon her arrival, this was a held breath piece! Damn…
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Thanks. You are great.
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Nick DC wrote a new post
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Read Morei want to bang my head against the wall because life's a cartoon fires in the streets protest signs with all talk and no action bitch, weed and cocaine Charlie's Kirk wife is on her WWE tour his base is rushing to Grinder Trump just started...
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Great piece here Nick. This is some great social commentary of our current world.
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Powerfully penned, Nick. Spitting facts on this one, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Speechless!
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Daniel Long wrote a new post
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Read More“In the company of imageries within my castle, I voice for everyone my next poetic verse. All the empty halls listen and echo my passion, And in darkly rich verse I immerse.” Through the courtyard, pulls up a hearse, Beneath the arms of stone...
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This is so dark and haunting. fav line is “Their shrill shadowed the echo through these hollow halls,
“The dark-suited burial conveyance led amiss of a poet’s demise.”
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian