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Read MoreHey there, What’s up?I haven’t seen you in a while.Never figured I would run into you here.You look good. Did you lose some weight?Well, that’s great! Did you ever get married to your sweetheart in high school?Oh. Well, that’s...
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Appreciate it Dampkitten. Thanks for the feedback.
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Well…fuck.. this wasn’t what I was expecting. But damn was it good. Talk about a plot twist! You’ve done it again Vision. I like it! xx
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I do enjoy a plot twist from time to time. Thanks P.G for the comments.
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Vivid and sharp. Very creative.
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Thanks Thomas. Appreciated!
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What have I just read?! Fight club and Identity had a baby poem.
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YES! Great description here M.E. Thanks for the comments.
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WHAT’S THE FUCKING ISSUE?!?
OK THEN! YOU ASKED FOR IT!!Felt this deep. Very creative, Keith xoxo
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Appreciate it Fia. Thanks! xx
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Thanks!
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Fight Club vibes, Keith. The Dr. Seuss of horror my friend. Great write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks for the comments. Always…
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Read MoreYou glide your thumb across my lips My tongue darts out to taste Both of us aware of our own thirst For the other Leaning in close as if pulled Breathing in each other breaths Time is slow and absurdly fast My head tilts to a...
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You are HOT as shit, just like always… and I’m all about Tequila.
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Hmm Damp Kitten and tequila. Tasty. Thank you ❤️
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Now I am drunk on these lines!
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The lines… or…? lol
Thank you, M.E
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E..ve..ry..th..ing!
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Well, that is tempting. ;))
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Intoxicating write, Fia. The room always gets hot when you spill, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. Need some heat over here.;))
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very hot
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Thank you, Ambjr;))
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Read MoreMy face - a mirror of a life that's been lived Thoughtfulness crinkled my skin Laughter lines tell stories of shared joy Deep reflections carved a crease on my forehead My mind - both healer and weapon Marcyless I speak words that can kill My...
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Beautifully penned, Sappho. This an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I truly believe that you mean every word…
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Greetings, Sappho (Elke) 🌿
It’s just Richard, dropping-in to say hello and partake of this eloquently laid Free Verse piece that has virtually soared my senses through the effulgent beauty of your poetic voice.
Your title caught my eye right-off, drawing me in to be greeted by your uniquely impacting art choice, leading down into the magical depths of words, lines, and fluently flowing lines that simply left me spellbound.
Within the musical timbre of your wondrous words dances the perfect spirit of an enthralling woman’s heart and soul … not the hallmark of a novice’s pen, but of one who’s lived ‘n done “that” to fullest measure, literally or through the magic of creative imagination … either way, I’m smitten!
Sappho’s “Ode to Aphrodite” is a Free Verse piece I read as a young lad, and your use of her name has mystified my manly maturity, let’s say.
Elke, I thank you ever-so warmly and gratefully for sharing You.
Namasté, Dear Poetess 🙏 ⁓ Richard🖌Psst!
(V2-L2, Marcyless = Merciless) 🤓
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You have a wild imagination, VOI. I wasn’t expecting a psychotic suicide. But yeah, this is definitely a vision of insanity… true to form!