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Read MoreI failed her test.We were two equationsfrom the startwe just didn't add up. If my brain is travelingat 80 miles per hourand hers at 50,how long will it taketo determineour possible chemistry? She studied me,but couldn't findthe answer. Now I'm back,trying to...
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Force of attraction formula in physics.
F = G * (m1 * m2) / r².Force of attraction formula in humans
L= G * (m1 * m2) / r².Where L is Love
G is Gentleman
M1 is number of times he messed up
M2 is number of times she messed up
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Cleverly penned, Tim. Amazing wordplay, love the whole equation vibe. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tim I absolutely loved this. This is a brilliant use of the math metaphor for relationships with women. Truly an enjoyable and amazing read for me tonight.
John
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Damn. This is next level. Mixing poetry AND math. Brilliant!!!
Much respect
Naaj
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This is gentle and clever the way you turn numbers into feeling it lands with a quiet ache. I always can expect something fresh every time I go to the back of the book if you will…
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Read MoreI cuddled up witha metaphor that wascaught in the corner ofmy room.I dressed it in thesilk of kings, and fedit from the fracturedtrees of innocence.Low-hanging fruit ofdespair gets usevery time.
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This is awesome. You’re so talented.
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Thank you
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Great work, Thomas.
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Thanks Tim.
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Beautifully penned, Thomas. Magnificent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you.
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Thank you so much.
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Read MoreThe hum hum of the musicOne sleepy faceThe shisha lightsYou in front of meTakenBut oh good sexYou took a look at meI could not stop my smilePretended smoking cough The hum hum of the musicOne sleepy faceThe neon lightsYou in...
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Powerful.
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Thank you a lot. ❤️
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Thank you dear. Nice to hear from you. Have a fabulous day because you deserve it.
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Read MoreBlack wings that flutter through stormy sunshine. That storm within… with the sun glowing through black clouds that gathered over my eyes… Bright enough to penetrate into the dark of my soul… This storm and sun intertwined, ebony silhouette of the raven soaring through...
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This is magnificent.
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Thank you, Alexandria.
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You’re welcome. I love your work.
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Phenomenal write, Daniel. Nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I love the math component in this. Some things don’t always add up but we must figure out the equation:))