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Read MoreInspired by: Sum 41 – Catching Firehttps://youtu.be/0HwXgNG-51A?si=rDqqBbwjaxgcddsLI feel like every day's a victory because I have these racing thoughts saying that everyone's against me I tell myself they're just delusions but it's hard to deny the world has gone to shit I just want to...
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Thanks. Glad you like it.
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This reminds me of “I Dreamed a Dream” from Les Miserable. We start out full of hope & sparkle & the world dulls our shine until there’s nothing left. Just bills to pay & the hope we go out on a good note rather than the usual shit. Totally feeling this one
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The world gets too big I suppose. It’s never enough to stay in your own happiness. The world is designed to take and take. But also the older we get we are hit with reality. Losing people, losing friendships and so on. I think the thing that hurts the most is knowing when those moments are gone they are gone. There will be no other moments like them
Thanks for the read, friend. Very much appreciate it.
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Brilliantly penned, Nick. Into the book it belongs! This write has layers my friend, excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks very much. Glad you liked my poem, friend.
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This is the second time I have read this, and I want to think about it. Depression is a strange beast. Not suicidal but not feeling the same. will drop dead doing something you hate. That struck a cord. I used to like the job I do, but too many worms came out of the apple, and now I work. This is my passion. To write and see others do what they love to do.
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For me the poem is rather my darkest depression. The world beats you down and some days I feel like I’m just going through the motions. As the poem says I’m not suicidal, but there is comfort in the idea that I choose the way rather than it being something, or somewhere I rather not be.
Thanks for the read, friend.
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Read MoreQuite the chocolatieress you are! In the heat of our moment your heart of chocolate melts. I’m likewise quite the chocolatier! In the passion of our molding bodies my heart drips warmly over your skin. Quite sweet is your heart, quite salty is mine, you...
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tasty indeed, hehe. There’s more taste to come in upcoming posts. Lol. Thanks!
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Read MoreConstellations - the original celebrityThe only difference is cavemen & women couldn't change the fucking channelSharp lies and an amputee kinkLike her asshole, gangrene took it to the elbowMummified puppies in shoe-boxes shipped UPS priorityStrap it on, in cause...
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“Heaven’s the same and where her ribs punch through the silicone drains”
Powerfully penned, Keith. The line above, that’s a fucking line my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. Appreciated!
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Powerful. Sharp and vivid.
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Thanks Thomas. Appreciate it!!
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Thanks HJ. You rock!
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Read MoreSweet Carnage Dreams You ever had one of those damndreams where you have totalmotherfucking control? I don't get them often and usuallyI waste them telling a dead personthat they have passed away! That's so stupid. Then I wake up.My dreams always seem...
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Magnificent! Poem of the fucking year! Seriously!
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Thanks so much!
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That’s a great piece Nick👍