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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreI was born from two people who did not know what they created A force to be reckoned with, never to be underestimated. As I walk into the room, all eyes are on me. Smooth like iceNot seeing the fire being set free What they don't...
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Don’t you dare leave.
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Um…duly noted. Definitely destruction incarnate
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Thank you, Willow
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This is rather unsettling knowing the devastation that’s so common these days with active shooters. Very scary.
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I did not want you to feel that way. Going with the prompt I created with Ambyr, He picked creation, and I chose to go with devastation. That encompasses Fire, Water, Ice
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No problem. The poem has a lot of weight to it and a lot of fire in its delivery.
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Powerfully penned, Fia. This is a change of pace my friend, you always prove there is no subject you can’t tame. It’s too close to call, you both delivered amazing writes. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. I needed to stretch and get out of comfort zone
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You nailed this one. No doubt about it. The kind of write that pulls you along in an inexorable tide of power and rhyme. I keep envisioning cement shoes while reading 😁
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Haha well that’s interesting. Thank you Detritus
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Read MoreOh so much time has passed.As children,playing and laying in the grass.Memories like nothing else. With doubts,nonexistant and always false.With time,we grew taller.And we fell even harder. We reached the stars and skies,planets.We achieved the impossible.Now you are nearly 18. You wonder,where...
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Read MoreThere's urgent breaking news online...The shooter's still about.Each time I see the tally climbMy faith converts to doubt. There's blood inside the church's door...I'm guessing I should run?I'm not one into blood and gore,My brain is going numb. Some catholic kids...
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This is scary but true. Nice spill here.
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Thanks, Fia. It’s happening everyday now.
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I cannot tell you how my stomach dropped when I saw they finally confirmed fatalities among the kids. I had so hoped there would only be injuries. I hate that this is now just reality for so many people and I hate that it feels like nothing can be done. I refuse to accept that as an answer.
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I agree, Green. It’s unfortunate that this happens all too often now. Thank you for your comment.
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I wish this wasn’t so accurate…
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So do I. Thanks for the comment.
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Tremendous work. Powerful.
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Thank you, Thomas.
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Strong poem inspiring strong feelings. Wishing this weren’t happening. But wishing isn’t enough. Here in my state people can own a gun without a license even. Sickening.
John
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I hate guns myself. I wish they were never invented. Thanks John. When time permits I’ll be by your way for some good reading.
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Read MoreDo you ever wonder, like, what would be the most horrible way to die?"For me, it's a bunch of old men, biting and eating me alive", she saidHey! Get some light over here Trash, is taking her clothes off again"That...
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Zombie’s eating you alive is the worst way to die in my opinion. Nice piece Keith
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Totally agree. Thanks Fia. xox
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. Appreciate you!!
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Walking Dead and nuclear war in such a short piece…impressive!
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Always try & keep it short & to the point. Thanks Paula.
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Read MoreTik tok22:29, 22:30The clock's heart beatIn the rhythm of the musicDullRandomQuietThis moment will be lost foreverIt will never come back.
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you have immortalized it here I feel your pain it is now a part of my soul 💕to quote Jamie Lee Curtis life happens in seconds…
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Yes it is true. Thank you for the feedback and for taking time and reading it.
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