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Read MoreReplay it's the day after the morning of the disaster that occurred 24 years since the burning dissolving and falling all those floors nothing but ash swan dives from skyscraper windows others lowering the sash so as not to see what's coming dissolving and falling 24 years since the burning a...
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Thank you for your comment, Tim.
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Thank you for your kind review, Tim.
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You’re welcome, J. Now look where my avatar is (towards the right of your reply). Not underneath it.
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I see Tim…will make sure to do that from now on.
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That’s better. 🙂
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Yay!
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lol :))))
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Read MoreIn the grip of winterImpending dreadThe opposing army seized their homeFought them hard and with honorCritical madness All of his family slaughteredDisemboweledStillborn removedTorchedCharred remains He was the last survivorBarely endured the massacreRidden with diseaseSevered survivalGasping for airOn life support A vacant coffin...
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Wow, I felt this. Very powerful write.
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Thanks Fia. Appreciate it.
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No one every really wins at war. It is just useless devastation and loss of lives.
This is an impressive portrait showing that.
And no one really survives. Even the survivors suffer so much mental and emotional loss.
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Absolutely. The only winners are the governments of the world. Thanks Jacob.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. The casualties of war extend farther than those who gave their life, others are scarred physically and mentally for the rest of their existence. With Governments that discard them, after they’ve been broken by war. Sad but true my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
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No one comes out unharmed. It’s a shame we here about so much of it time & time again. No matter what part of the world or decade, war rears it’s ugly head. Thanks my friend.
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Tremendous work. RiGHT ON MAN.
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Thank you Thomas for the awesome feedback!
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You’ve captured very well the horror of a dark day and a country divided. We’re in dangerous times…but when I look back, with assassinations, riots, Viet Nam…we’ve always had dark times. Let’s hope the future gets better instead of worse.