Thank you for the update Fia. I was wondering what had happened.

The poor guy. lol He should have known better. When vamps smell food they go for it. 🙂

Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent storytelling as always my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

Magnificent storytelling Fia. Succulent!!

Blade vibes.
I was emersed from the start.
regards
James

Good story for a movie…..

The house was torn down about 10 yrs ago. The funniest person I saw go in and out looked like Colonel Sanders with the white hair and clothes.
The real house had about 8 girls not related. Most were also street hookers.

I agree this could be done as a movie. Good write

Paula, this is such a great story. Would make a perfect screenplay for a movie, I agree with the others. Actions packed, and uninhibited story telling. The plot unfolds with lots of surprises.

John

What would Paula do with $10k….DM me.
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Hmmmm? Hire someone to cook out at the local park and give away the food. Replace my bed and sofa. Buy curtains. New teeth. New shoes and clothes. All gone.

Hoi hoi Paula,
Like this one a lot.

I know for a fact that some sorts of giving makes me richer.
And practicing it for a very very long time.

Keep them (the poems) coming please?
Kind regards, Gus

Omg that little..shit. She lived and he dies and the whole family destroyed because of a kiss that was never going to happen. Wickedly good story

Thanks Fia.

Guys have been getting hurt for centuries over women in some way or another. :/

Paula this is a masterfully written poem. it had me riveted to read what happened next. Suspenseful with lots of surprises. You really engage the reader. Am very impressed.

John