Daniel Long

Duhsjaak
7 months, 1 week ago

chèr D.,
Amen to that.
I’ll be back tomorrow to read it again.

Kind regards, Gus
- Damian DeadLove
  7 months, 1 week ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Gus. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Come back as often as you’d like. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Detritus
7 months, 1 week ago

Your wallop of a write had me nodding in agreement. So many truths are nestled in every line. Love will indeed live forever! Outstanding write, my friend.

Clay
- Damian DeadLove
  7 months, 1 week ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Clay. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for your support. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Fia Naturie
7 months, 1 week ago

Well said. No body is promised tomorrow.
- Damian DeadLove
  7 months, 1 week ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Exactly, nobody is promised tomorrow. Appreciate you, cuz.
  
  Damian
Visions_of_Insanity
7 months, 1 week ago

That last stanza sends this one home. Wonderful piece Damian.
- Damian DeadLove
  7 months, 1 week ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. My favorite stanza as well. Appreciate you.
Damian DeadLove
7 months, 1 week ago

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, H. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for sharing that wonderful vision with me, I like the lens you’re looking through. Appreciate you.

Damian
NAAJIR
7 months, 1 week ago

” Shadows on the wall are growing

Coming to poison what God built ”

Those words were written with a hammer and chisel.

Dope overall vibe
Diggin the positive outro, brother…

Much respect

Naaj
- Damian DeadLove
  7 months, 1 week ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Naaj. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I dig those lines as well. Thank you for your continued support my brother. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Willow
7 months, 1 week ago

Sigh…where to start? I agree with Naaj up there. 👆 Those lines are definitely carved in granite. There’s a loss of humanity occurring on so many levels today. AI is replacing human labor, taking human paychecks and means of living. But AI does what man tells it. It’s not out there knocking on doors and handing out resumes. It’s the greed of man dehumanizing their fellows that’s doing the damage. The fact that we have a deranged overstuffed cheese puff feeding frenzy to his blind acolytes speaks volumes for the state of man’s moral compass right now. Every decision they’re making is destructive…to the earth (our host) and to its guests (us and wildlife). Yeah, I got rolling but this one took me to so many places. Keep carving those lines, my friend, and I’m sure I’ll keep ranting
- Damian DeadLove
  7 months, 1 week ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Like I told Naaj, I love those lines as well. I agree with you as I tend to do, I saw a story today where Chat GPT is causing people to commit crimes and hurt others and themselves. It needs to be regulated at the very least, but that ain’t happening with the Cheeto in power. These tech bros are accessories to the most corrupt regime after all. Man’s moral compass is damn near broken. lol. Always enjoy your commentary, even though I get you riled up. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian

Fia Naturie
7 months, 1 week ago

I can make great stuffed shells. Now I’m hungry. lol
- Visions_of_Insanity
  7 months, 1 week ago
  
  Let me know when your making Stuffed Shells. I’ll bring the desserts! Thanks Fia.
Damian DeadLove
7 months, 1 week ago

Tastefully penned, Keith. I’m an Al Dente kinda guy as well. I love pasta and Italian food in general, but then again I really love Mexican food as well. Damn, I’m hungry now. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  7 months, 1 week ago
  
  Thanks Damian. Appreciate the generous comments.
Sappho (Elke)
7 months, 1 week ago

This is a very delicious poem, dear Keith!
I love Italian pasta – is the title an invitation?
- Visions_of_Insanity
  7 months, 1 week ago
  
  Yes! Fly on over to me. We’ll have a huge Italian meal. Or I’ll fly to you and we can meet somewhere in Italy. Thanks my friend! xox

Damian DeadLove
7 months, 1 week ago

Hauntingly penned, Keith. Somethings just aren’t right in this world. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  7 months, 1 week ago
  
  HA! Nothing is right in the world. Enter at your own risk! Thanks man.
Backdeckbenny (Peter)
7 months, 1 week ago

Keith
I loved the way you used the alphabet in reverse to pen this piece.
Clever and worthy of a gold ⭐⭐⭐⭐
- Visions_of_Insanity
  7 months, 1 week ago
  
  Hello Peter. i appreciate the generous comments here. Thanks!
PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos)
7 months, 1 week ago

Letters make nothing of path’s quest.
- Visions_of_Insanity
  7 months, 1 week ago
  
  Valid point. Thanks PAR.