Sweet descriptive piece with hints of longing

Hello John,

Your description here captures the atmosphere so perfectly. Your detail is always so razor sharp. Nice work.

Beautifully penned, John. Phenomenal imagery my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Your poem puts me in the mood of sailing and travel, the image of a sailor who is watching and expressing the scenes, keeping it in his head because soon it will only be a memory. There is sadness going along all the lines. Emotionally written.

Tremendous work. Powerful writing.

Inspiration can come from many places, but to be able to create something like this is exceptional, John. Great poem with creative images. 🙂

This was so perfectly executed that I can’t tell which is whose voice. Powerfully descriptive imagery,both of you 🙌

You forgot a birthday. Well, it looks like you made up for it. lol

Sam, I hope you’ve learned your lesson! Maybe invest in a calendar? Lol, God forbid you forget an anniversary. 😉 Great read, just enough to get the blood pumping.

xx ~P.G💋

Hoi hoi
Love this one a lot. Really good write.
The corners of my mouth have a will of their own and keep on turning up.

Did you ever considerate writing a song to the accompaniment of slamming doors?
If you are not going to do it, I will.
Well, honestly someone’s got to do it huh?

I’ll be on the look out for your next.
Kind regards, Gus

That story sure illustrates a great way to show forgiveness.

im sorry… I hope that heightened sense of arousal didn’t get you in trouble. ill go hide somewhere so you dont find me

Cotton Candy is called Fairy Floss in Australia.
“She tastes like fairy floss”
Fact or fiction, you’re writing is always terrific and always grammatically correct.

🌻

Thanks. I think I need to find more meaning in my life. I post everyday and have put together 2 books that no one has read. It’s starting to seem pointless. I may take a break soon or just give up.

Hoi hoi
Love this one.

I went to a lezzie bar (one of the first in Amsterdam) with a lady friend of mine. It wasn’t really common for a guy to be there and my bum was lovingly slapped by some of the women on their way to the loo.

That’s why I know that there is always something going on in the loo.

My idea for you would be to drink a little less and love a little more. Love as in making love.
And never give up trying for happiness and very good writes….

But hey, it’s only me. I read your writes no matter what.
Kind regards, Gus

Keep on write and keep on tasting the cotton candy. Don’t give up.

You are super talented. Don’t leave!