Wow! I’m speechless. My father died of dementia and this is a bit scary to read being I can relate to it. Noy only in what I saw from my father but others around him during hospital and rehab visits.

I’m glad you didn’t leave. You’re too good to hide your writing.

Thanks so much for the dedication, Paula. 🙂

This is good. My friend’s mother has dementia, and it breaks her heart to see her that way.
I am also glad you did not leave.

hello dearest Sam I think demons were created with purpose have a different society perhaps even older than us great thought provoking write ❤️

I agree with Crimsin. Thanks for sharing Sam.

Now you invite the demons to dinner. I still didn’t get an invitation. lol
This is a good piece, Sam

When it gets that bad around here, I generally reach for my first edition copy of Leonard Norman Cohens New Skin for an Old Ceremony and everything immediately begins to look n feel more rosy .. Smashing post today sir T .. write on .. Neville 👍👍

Cool poem Thomas. Can feel the burn.

I feel that. Chocolate though…popcorn is more my demon. Still can’t save

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I enjoy walking in the dark when I am low. I enjoyed your poem.
Just the other day I trudged through the woods after nightfall with the dogs.
I also like the picture. a long exposure.
Regards
James

Thank you.

This sounds so good. Your writing is amazing.

This is an amazing accomplishment, my friend. All of the references to technology, and the way you use them is like candy — so sweet and perfect. I just want to stop for a moment and admire phrases like, “We’re floppy disks in the age of air,” or, “The signal fades like a VHS tape,”and so many others. So beautiful in so many ways: the words, the music all meld into a magical achievement. Why the hell aren’t you famous?

Cleverly penned, Drieks. Amazing lyrics my friend loved the technological wordplay. Excellent work as always with the arrangement. Appreciate you.

Damian

FD said I had to come, listen/read your words. I am so glad I did. Loved the word play, the technology references, damn, the whole song. Many snaps and a bag of chips!!!

Curt

Superb work. Powerful.