You are a good storyteller. You kept me in the story. Bravo

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you enjoyed the story my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

You draw a bleak future my friend…

Yes… I do have the same feelings… it doesn’t look good

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. It’s a twisted world for sure. Appreciate you.

Damian

I’m not a great fan of now either . how I hanker for those glorious days of yore when steam was king and the world seemed a whole lot slower and simpler .. I whole-heartedly concur .. much of this mess we are now in is down to politicians and in particular their arrogance, ignorance and greed .. In fact, they kill more people each year than flu, cholera, malaria and great white sharks combined .. I just hope your middle name aint Nostradamus .. Anyway, I gotta dash, my bunker needs re-stocking .. Neville 😎👍

Angel, getting up and facing the day can be a heroic feat. You enshrined your rising with heartfelt beauty. Love this poem.

John

Honest and transparent. Keep on keeping on.

Honestly penned, Angel. Dark undertones, but with a sense of optimism in the end. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello lovely poetess I can relate to this feeling it’s very well written and you push through it that’s positive 💕

Thank you, Adira

In some ways you’re courageous for even contemplating a better day to follow. I’ve seen some that have given up totally and would never even contemplate that kind of thought. The chains of depression are often impossible to break for some. Great poem, Angels.

You have the right attitude. We all encounter unpleasantness in life–it can’t be helped. Look at it as spilled milk, get busy taking care of yourself and carry on. That is often hard to do, but we must.

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