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Daniel Long wrote a new post
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Read MoreWith invisible hands, my eyelids unlock, reaching for you. Distance does not matter, my eyes can hold you and press you against me. Eye to eye, hand in hand, we embrace. Lips press into one another's, tongues lap in a wet embrace, and we share our breaths.
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Brilliantly penned, Daniel. A very powerful read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I can feel you from here, Danny
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Brilliantly penned, Daniel. Intense write my friend, nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for the compliments Mary 🙏🏻
I’m planning on writing a poem alternating between English and my native language.
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” Blood stained feathers smeared across cross wearing habits.”
This hits home
Much respect
Naaj
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Thank you Naaj. It means a lot coming from you.
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Brilliantly penned, Drieks. This is a magnificent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian 🙏🏻
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What a fantastic final line summary, Girl!
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Thomas W. Case wrote a new post
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Read MoreShe had these little cupsof coffee for eyes, and Ishould have stayed upall night.Love is a drunk whore.A lie from Saturn.Venus, slither back in theocean where you belong.Loneliness is a knife cuttingmy balls off.Knowledge arrived with analarm clock from...
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From the first line to the last, I was caught up in this
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Thanks, Willow.
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Brilliantly penned, Thomas. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks
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Thank you.
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Thank you.
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I love the vague references and allusions, the metaphorical array of madness and symbolism. You can certainly feel the missteps and empathize with the devastation. As with all good poetry, I can read this in several different ways.
It’s a piece that keeps calling you back, Thomas… like a final glance behind you at a beautiful woman passing by.
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Thank you. I appreciate it.
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S. Libellule wrote a new post
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Read MoreTell all the truth but tell it slant — Dickinson You must tell Verity but slant itIt dazzles if too boldMakes it far too sharp to graspEven when it's retold A flash direct blinds simple SoulsAs Mysteries revealMore depth than Spotlights...
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Fantastic! As usual…
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Thanks Adagio…
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Thanks my dear… know what you mean… I am often far too blunt…
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I smiled after the first reading then read it twice more
something quite sating in those lines..much enjoyed!
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Beautifully penned, LDF. Liked this a lot my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Diggin this vibe
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