Brilliantly penned, Daniel. Intense write my friend, nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you for the compliments Mary 🙏🏻
I’m planning on writing a poem alternating between English and my native language.
Not sure how that’ll work out!

” Blood stained feathers smeared across cross wearing habits.”

This hits home

Much respect

Naaj

Brilliantly penned, Drieks. This is a magnificent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

What a fantastic final line summary, Girl!

From the first line to the last, I was caught up in this

Brilliantly penned, Thomas. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Outstanding poem Thomas. Love it!!

Thank you.

Thank you.

I love the vague references and allusions, the metaphorical array of madness and symbolism. You can certainly feel the missteps and empathize with the devastation. As with all good poetry, I can read this in several different ways.

It’s a piece that keeps calling you back, Thomas… like a final glance behind you at a beautiful woman passing by.

Thank you. I appreciate it.

Fantastic! As usual…

Thanks my dear… know what you mean… I am often far too blunt…

I smiled after the first reading then read it twice more
something quite sating in those lines..

much enjoyed!

Beautifully penned, LDF. Liked this a lot my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

You’re not getting the job to write Hallmark cards

BIG

I agree with, Speak. I busted out laughing when I read his comment. Great write, Keith. You oughta start your own card company, your motto could be: “I write what you’re thinking, but don’t have the balls to say.” Has a nice flow to it, doesn’t it? Appreciate you.

Damian