I can tell that trip had a deep impact on you. Love this 4-part piece of work.

Okay, you earned a “Wow!”. this is very good. The second one is my favorite, because it seems like the peak of them all.
Even, the fourth reads like an epilogue, btw. Planned? A solid quartet of strong writing.
Awesome crafting of words!

Beautifully penned, S. Excellent collection of poems my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Libellule, this poem is so artfully crafted and an exquisite blend of light, artistry and form. There s gentle flow here that felt like reflections on the art so gently scribed I could feel what you saw in an emotional way. Truly great poetry.

John

You summed up life very neatly in this piece.
🙏

Thanks Peter.

Oh man it burst into flames. Walked three feet then it was over. Life is short

You never know when it’s your time.

“Blackbird (can’t) Fly” 🎵🎵

“Into the light of the dark black night”
black and blue – a wonderful color combo

A whole story told in such a short space. Very thought provoking.