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Read MoreTERMINATION They say there is a multiverse...places where our other choicesin life have been made and "that"version of life moves forward. --- Rae has discovered that she ispregnant by her boyfriend Ray.Her dream job starts in 2 weeksand she is not choosing...
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Read MoreJoshua Daniel's hands wore thick calluses and he didn't smile much. At age thirty-two, he worked in fields and chopped wood. The blood, toil, and sweat made him tough. On the 28th of June, under the big oak tree at...
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Phenomenally penned, Tim. You’re a great storyteller my friend, felt like a western to me. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks very much, Damian.
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This does give a western vibe. I like the listening to the tree to hear the screaming.
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Thanks very much, Fia. 🙂
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I normally do not read the short story section, but I was curious, so…
Revenge is sometimes blinding. This write shows that to be true.
Your story reads fluid, interesting, carrying the scenes forward really well. The epilogue (of sorts) leaves the reader pondering, perhaps for a continuation.
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I appreciate your comment, Styx. Thanks very much. 🙂
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This was very engaging. Some of those dead have unfinished business. Great ink.
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Thank you very much, Nick. 🙂
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Hi Tim!
This reminds me of an episode of Hell on Wheels! And the pic really reinforces the tone of the story.
Gritty with emotion and guns. How it was back then. Black and white with a lot of dust instead of grey.
Truly enjoyed the read amigo. It’s nice seeing friends post in different categories.-
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Thank you for the nice comment, Adelly. Much appreciated. 🙂
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Tim you have mastered the art of putting so much action, plot development, and powerfully emotional story telling into the short story form. This takes you into the heart of Joshua and his tragic mistake leading to his ending. Gritty and strong telling of this tale that engaged me as I read. Not a line wasted. A perfect economy of words that brings this tale home in a big way.
John
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Wow, thank you, John. I couldn’t have asked for a better comment. 🙂
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I love everything about this. From the feelings like shadows, to confiding to the stars.
Beautiful expression on such a sad topic.
You are amazing:)-
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hello lovely Adelphina thank you for your love on this ❤️
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Simply beautiful….
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hello dearest Benny thank you graciously for the lovely comment ❤️
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hello beautiful thank you graciously for showing me love on this it’s deeply felt ❤️
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Yes, you have to love now and love them hard. That message is potent. You wrote this well.
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hello beautiful Fia yes that’s exactly it you have to love the people and animals you’re around with all of your heart thank you graciously ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. This one pulled at my heartstrings my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you for feeling me so deeply ❤️
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Some are shaped by pain to early. Others, late lose the joy. The truth is in the moment, and loving those you’re with 🌼❤
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hello dearest Joe good morning thank you graciously for understanding yes that’s it ❤️
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I hope today’s a good day for you.my friend 🌼
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Read MoreTHE AFFAIR Fat Agnes snitched. I knew she would.We saw Nick Smith kissing Pastor Roy's wife out by the dumpster between the church and the soup kitchen. They saw that we saw and begged usto let them gently tell Roy. I...
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Classic…..made me giggle.
I thought you loved me….brilliant
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Okay first stanza is the shocker.
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I enjoyed this surprising tale. That darn Agnes!
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She’s appeared in two previous pieces. She’s the church bookkeeper who is stealing to fund her casino addiction.
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Thanks.