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Read MoreNumerically correctNew miracles are set to seem improbableVicariously intactThe same old mysteries at hand remain unsolvableI’m incomparableLike a tether to a WiFi wearable in pairing modeHighly programmableWritten to a T-prompt Yet riddled with debunked error codesStopped to a halt...
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Thanks so much Atticus!
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Chère D.,
Hope this finds you well?!What a poem!!!
I’d hate to love you
as much as I loved to hate myselfAls dit niet geniaal is, vreet ik mijn hoed op!
Zei de loco plaatsvervangend substituut vooraitter van de Amsterdamse fanclub.Please keep the stamina ens keep them coming!
Warm regards, Gus-
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Hey Gus!
Thank you! Bedankt voor je mooie woorden!Groetjes!
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics my friend with a stellar accompaniment that compliments your amazing words. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian! 🙏 Appreciate it.
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Your poem reaches out to my soul, dear Drieks. The power that it holds is perfectly transformed into music. Excellent work!
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I must be missing something. I don’t see the song anywhere?
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There should be an audio upload right below the poem. If not, maybe the device you’re on doesn’t support it correctly 🤔
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Thank you for your kind words Elke!
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Oh I love this. You killed it!
I was nodding my head while listening to the song.
Keep pushing forward:)
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Thank you so much Adelphina! 🙏🏻
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Read MorePrince Charming was dragged4 city blocks by his dickDecaying behind blood & urine colored glassSkid marks are vibrant with the city lights shining downShe never moved an inchWhat did you think she was going to do?She was only taught...
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Ouch.. Hauntingly penned, Keith. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you my friend.
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This is a hauntingly intense poem! One of the cases where you can completely understand the underlying motif. Nevertheless, everything in me cries for a peaceful solution.
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Appreciate the kind words Elke. Thank you.
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Read More1) Feed the homeless2) Make wallets or belts3) If they have beautiful hair, scalp them and make wigs to sell4) Props for a horror film you create and self release5) Leave parts in restaurant bathrooms, especially fast food joints6)...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. A well thought out list my friend. I thought for sure you’d say selling organs on the dark web. That was uncalled for on my part, your influence has started to rub off on me. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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HA! That is a good on Damian. Thanks for the feedback!
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Number 8 is the artist’s way. If the artwork didn’t sell you can always return to the Hannibal option.
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Oh so true. Check out the movie Color Me Blood Red from 1965. It’s a trashy, early gore flick with a story line similar to what were talking about. Thanks M.E
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In the crime novel The sculptor” by chris Carter, the killer does exactly what you suggest, creating art of his victims. You should send him your list. I’m sure he would be very grateful.
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Thank you Elke. Nice to hear from you. xxo
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At the weekly neighborhood meeting, old Mrs. Duarte leaned in toward Paulo with a conspiratorial whisper. “Get rid of the evidence for good.” Paulo froze. He’d only been in charge of organizing the community bake sale for two days — what evidence could she possibly mean?
She pointed at the table behind him. There, in plain sight, sat the charred remains of what was supposed to be her famous lemon cake. “It never happened,” she said, crossing her arms. “If anyone asks, tell them the oven betrayed me.”
Paulo nodded solemnly, swept the crumbs into a napkin, and decided that some secrets were worth keeping — especially when they smelled like burnt sugar.You’re very inspiring, my friend. Hugs.
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Happy to hear this piece inspired you. Damn! Your reply is awesome! I love it! You are super creative.
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❤️
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Read MoreI miss youI wish you never left meSadness follows meA new year, with the same old sorrows Screw this!I'm too old for this shitMy feelings and this poem were pathetic I'm gonna blast some Slayer, cook some burgers and later on...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. You gotta do what you gotta do. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks man.
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hi dearest Keith sounds like a plan you could always meet someone new ❤️
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Totally. Thanks Brenda.
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Rocky or Expendables? Burger sounds good
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Neither. Nighthawks! Great Stallone film. Thanks Fia.
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Slayer, Stallone and steak are priorities. Well written piece. “)
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Appreciate that M.E Thanks!!
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Slayer! A very direct and clear message. Slayer and cheese burgers really made me think about life. I often use People = SHIT as a meditation. Great work.
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Hello James. Thanks for the awesome comments. Slayer & cheeseburgers go hand & hand.
Keith
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good evening thank you graciously I look forward to your visits ❤️
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Chère C.,
Not one to settle down is not necessarily the problem.
A couple of those may be convenient.
One who sees you as the oasis and one to hoover an put the garbage outside?
And who says you can’t be the sultan?Your poem opened my eyes to many possibilities!
That’s what good work is supposed to do: be mind blowing….
Next one please…..
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hello Gus thank you for such a beautiful comment though I couldn’t be a Sultan because I like a man who leads ❤️
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A well written piece! “)
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thank you graciously dearest Me hi there ❤️
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Beautiful, Drieks! Keep on, keeping on.