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    a maddening sorrow prevails when all else failssorrow stirred can't be deniedit fills my inner chambersflooding me with the feelingof never was love, for him anywaymy soul cannot reconcile the emotion, with the hurtmy worry, it will not ever...

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    • Chère C.,
      As in:
      I see small lines in your face.
      They are beautiful.
      I had to wait an awful long time for them.
      And now they are Here, I won’t let you go…
      And I would cup your face in my hands.
      Yes, something like this, for sure.
      Warm regards, Gus

    • Great write but not as great as the picture of a beautiful woman.I don’t know if it’s you in the picture or not but there is something seriously attractive about her.
      It’s beauty that goes deeper than skin,wisdom that goes deeper than words,scar tissue that colours the soul.
      🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

      • hello dearest Benny no it is not me just an example of a beautiful older lady…lines and all my feelings got hurt that’s what this write was about I think people should take in all of you to see your beauty… not just the superficial…thank you for the love here ❤️

    • A deep, heartfelt poem Brenda. Well said..xo

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Age has been a humbling experience for me. lol. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    harlot

    dour were the notes I climb to youilliciting dismay I felt disparagedmy bosom heave and I exhale my disdainmy advances rebuffed I was left smitten with no way to rectifyunseeing lust, was covetoussomething happened to me when you let...

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    honesty

    delicate is the visiongentle is the waydeep within me I am summonedonce again to your throne roomsacred eyes behold the lady in crimson hair wild and blondeeyes wide and observinguntil I see youWisdom, in all your glorymy heart softens...

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    Behind A Grin

    Cutting against the grain is tough Battle tested dressed in scars It’s never easy when it gets rough Unable to reach the falling stars   Opportunity often left to chance I’m so done with second guessing  Forbidden love is a cosmic dance With issues that need addressing   Is...

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    • hello dearest Damian I love the flow here and the content is so true I feel you on this ❤️

    • Well said my friend. A powerful message I can relate to.

    • i love this…the rhyming scheme…your words, impressively expresses the
      compelling validity that stares us in our faces. an amazing write!
      ~ c

    • Dear D,

      For me this was on fire. I kept thinking of close calls trying to stay in my lane at the same time of feeling lured into another. With just enough sliver of light to keep the full on pitch black from engulfing my soul. Intense write. Great piece. H🌷

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, H. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Too many close calls, I know the feeling as well. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I like how this moves through doubt and self-interrogation without rushing to answers. The questions feel earned, not rhetorical.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thanks for your amazing commentary and continued support. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • There’s a simultaneous sense of strength and uncertainty in this that drag at me. Like you know you made the right choice, but how close was it to the edge? That feeling I know all too well. If we’re not reviewing actions, we’re probably doomed to repeat them. Goes for individually as well as globally. Another layered one. Keep chasing thought, my friend. You always bring gold when you do

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I think your commentary is a pretty spot on analysis, and it definitely applies to both. I’m too old to learn a different trick when it comes to chasing the truth my friend. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Love this! Skepticism is not paranoia, though gaslighters may disagree. Experience provides a roladex of patterned behaviors, and when there’s multiple red flags its no longer paranoia but an obvious truth.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Anna. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I concur with your powerful and precise commentary. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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