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Thank you, Fia. And Happy Holidays!
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Some days I glance at the mirror and can’t figure out who the stranger is. Like the mirror has ripples. But it’s no funhouse. I felt this one
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I understand, Willow, my friend. Thanks for the input!
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Mirrors don’t lie! It’s the cold hard truth when it comes to appearances.
I enjoyed the piles of yesterskin!Merry Christmas!
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Thanks, Addy (hope you don’t mind the short moniker). Hang on to some of that yesterskin, it could be worth something some day! Happy holidays!
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Okay. I didn’t know the mechanics of it, but now I do. My ex wife couldn’t walk past a mirror without stopping to admire herself, but she might run past them now, what with all that yesterskin pilled up. You’re hittin’ on all eight, old man.
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Ah, I think you, Sam, whoever you are. Where am I, anyway? What’s wrong with this TV? It’s got words all over it. Where the hell’s the game? Why am I typing the thing’s I’m thinking? Whzzzzxxrzpzzzz …
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Read MoreJust hear those lay bells jinglingRing-ting-tingling tooCome on, it's lovely weatherFor a lay together with you Outside the hoes are callinthey’ll be no blue ballin, "Yoo hoo"Come on, it's lovely weatherFor a lay ride together with you Get it up, get...
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Cleverly penned, Keith. Only the Dr. Seuss of horror could take this Christmas classic and flip it on its head. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you my friend.
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I was laughing so hard at this. Really good rendition Keith;))
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Appreciate that Fia. Hope you had a great holiday my friend..xo
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Oh what fun it is to ride!!! 😂😂😂
This is so funny and creative! Thank you very much for this wonderful Christmas gift, dear Keith!-
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Thank you Elke. Hope you had a great holiday my friend.xo
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A scorched-earth parody that weaponizes familiarity. The humor comes less from punchlines and more from how far it’s willing to push desecration of a cultural comfort song. Not subtle, but very intentional.
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Thanks Thomas.
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Read MoreShe likes it long in the backShe likes it short on the top and the sidesShe likes it back in blackShe wants to go for a mustache ride I am your mullet manYes I amGonna take you for a ride...
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Cleverly penned, Keith. It reads like lyrics my friend. Excellent write. “Do you know the mullet man? Who lives on dreary lane. lol. Appreciate you.
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I sure do my friend. He lives across the street from me! Thanks Damian.
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Read MoreEveryday it's on repeatdrink your coffee move your feetTake your brain and then disposewhere it goes, nobody knowsJust keep movingjust keep workingDesperate systemmental prisonKeep on the tracksdo not look backJust keep working hoursthat devoursHopes we're dreamingit's deceivingThis is madnesscostumed...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write about the never-ending loop called everyday life my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate the feedback. Thank you
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Read MoreNothing matters, no one matters, all of us will dieNo one exists here on purpose, reality a lieTrying to put meaning in your lifebut there is no grand designYou're searching for a spark that doesn't existYour empty feelings and...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate it Damian. Thank you!!
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This is really impressive dear Keith! We don’t know what the thereafter will bring. I think it is most important to listen to this little inner voice telling us what’s wrong or right. Therefore I try to speak and act in order to be helpful to others. I feel that this is the right thing to do..
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Thank you Elke for your kind words. xo
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This is stark and unapologetic. The poem commits fully to its worldview, and that honesty gives it weight.
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Appreciate the observation and kind words. Thanks Thomas
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What an interesting opening. The mirror shivers upon your approach. I like this.