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There is something truly magical and mesmerizing about verse, and you’ve captured that concept perfectly.
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Read More(a submissive’s soliloquy) I am beauty in silver silence—metal bites my wrists and ankles,each click a reminderthat I long for. Gagged,not to silence me—but to reinforcethat begging is not my right.Only moans,muffled and soaked,can pass through this leather bloom. He watches—patient as...
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Yes,yes. love it.
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I’m drawn to this like a moth to flame. 🦋
Cheater.
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Read MoreAre you ever anxious about the grocery store? I doubt you go outside thinking maybe I'll see her today Do you think about how your face would look when you see me? My doubt cycles over and over... a spiritual shoe in...
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Cleverly penned, Blue. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Go back and edit at the last two lines. There’s a space in the word “shoe”.
We always wonder if past lovers think about us… it’s a natural thing. Particularly at the grocery. And for all you guys out there that fucked me… yes, I remember you – particularly in produce when I’m looking through the cucumbers.
Seriously, Blue – I can relate. Now put your shoes in the dryer and go back for that check out boy.
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The metaphor of the shoe in the washing machine certainly heightens the auditory senses in the overall underlying anxiousness.
Great work Blue.
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Read MoreThere's always that person that is shrouded in maybes Of missed moments, shared glances Maybe even stolen kisses and touches Ambivalence lacing that the purest longing sorrow It's a wretched thing to get close to Everest And just end up with your heart as...
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Powerfully penned, Blue. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Or… the dude could have been a serial killer, and you missed out on a painful death. If Ted Bundy had been wandering around my campus when I was in school, just damn. I’d have jumped on that Volkswagen gearshift in a heartbeat.
I get you, though. Missed opportunity. It’s tough when you’re a girl. Guys think you’re being too assertive, but they always miss the signals.
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Like Damian stated, I also found this powerful. Not everyone can make it to the summit for whatever reasons, but your analogy here is strong.
Nicely penned.
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Powerfully penned, LDF. An incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian