A well written piece!
Did you use stream of consciouness, Fia-in-collab-mood? Hehehe

Good job both of you! “)

Great job…..

I always wonder who’s face that is when I look in the mirror… nice collaboration

Brilliantly penned, Fia & Ambjr. Into the book it belongs! It’s not easy for a collaboration to make my book. But this was seamless, incredible collab you two. Appreciate you, both.

Damian

This is such a well blended collaboration. And just real and raw. As good as it gets.

Great job you two.

Asks many questions that I ask myself… well done

I have lost friends because of then crossing a line. A line that was stated that was there and still they proceeded to cross it. nicely done.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you. Hope your 4th was cool. Appreciate you.

Damian

Incredible ink. I felt every word as I’ve dealt with many people like that.

Amazing write Damian.
Had my attention at every word.

Superb work.

Exactly, society today is unhinged. You have such a strong and fierce ability to pull the reader in Damian.
Loved this 👍🏻
Keep writing ✍️ thanks for sharing
Love Jackie 🤟

I not only can’t fathom how they can justify their greed & cruelty to themselves, I don’t want to. To sink to their level of thinking seems incredibly slimy to me. You never disappoint in bringing the Real, my friend

Powerful work. Tremendous

Brilliant storytelling, Meg. Appreciate you.

Damian

Once again, Megan🎖

Mystery, excitement, hardcore, tender … whatever/whenever perfection in a scenario demands, your pen seems to instinctively command visual diction with the stroke of a master artist’s brush.

You continually assure us of your raconteuric skills on any level in every theme, breathing life into the utmost sensual or deeply erotic scene, to characters’ personalities that take on verisimilitude as though we could reach out and touch them, smell their breath, feel their heat, actually hear the emotional timbre in their voices, and see the colors of their eyes, as their pupils dilate and flex.

Simply, enviously brilliant, Lady-Author … you’re provenly the best!
How very fortunate we are you share! ⁓ Richard🖌

Richard, it’s so wonderful to have you following along with me. Your comments blow my mind. You make me so happy! Sorry for the delay in the next chapter. Hopefully this week.

xoxoxo

Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Home isn’t where the heart is.
Home is where the mind is at peace with life.

To find home can be beautiful. I find life always pulls me away from that happiness. But I guess even more the reason to appreciate it.

Great ink

hello beautiful Fia I feel you have given us all the things you desire I hope we can return the favor great write 💕

this is badass dearest Damian love your message and flow 💕

Damn you just did a mini backroom confessional. What would they not do to rise, and there is always someone there to take it.

Monsters believe they hold all the cards. The funny thing it’s the people that give them power.

Great ink

Powerful and poignant.

Holy crap, what did you just do?! This is phenomenal!

“Savagely sedated saturation”

That is incredible alliteration right there! This whole thing just rocks the reader along…& that isn’t even saying anything about the message. Which is its own bag of holy crap! Clearly your late night musing hit a stride & you just ran with it, my friend!