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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

• 8 months, 4 weeks ago

The Great Deceiver

Poetry

September 21, 2025

19

Fueled by a consuming rage Pointed at every situation As I fall into the final stage Right before the initiation Locked inside self-torment Wiggling out of the noose Keeping all the spirits dormant Until madness is busting loose Pressure building within me Anger clouding all that I see Face...

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19 Comments
- Atticus Abbey
  8 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Great!
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Fia Naturie
  8 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  This is really good. Damian <3
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
    
    Damian
- Willow
  8 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Oh yeah, this one definitely needs a place on the album! I hope it’s coming along well! The halls are a bit echo-ey without you wandering them as often, my friend
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It’s going, though it took a while to get my “Logic Pro” software. Which allows me to mix better and I can even master my music with it. But, I got a song mapped out structurally, I have lyrics for everything but the bridge. Which I just came up with that bridge tonight. Gotta record vocals, and backing vocals next. Hopefully, I’ll be letting you hear it soon. I miss you too, my friend. You’ve been penning some excellent work my friend. Thanks for your continued support, it means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Thomas W. Case
  8 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Powerful work. Superb.
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Nick DC
  8 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Great work. I get an image of a man struggling with who to trust.
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Pretty much. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- RomaJ
  8 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  I get the sense of internal conflict, and the rhythm and urgency make it clear these are lyrics meant to be performed.
  
  The energy builds perfectly toward the chorus: “Face to face with destiny…” I especially like the line “Loyal to the art of betrayal” – it’s a great, concise piece of wordplay.
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I love that line as well. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Tim
  8 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  More great lyrics, Damian. Very heavy stuff. I hope to hear the music someday.
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. When I get some songs finished, I’ll let you check them out. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  8 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  A kickin piece my friend. Your a gift to the world with your writing.
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Thanks for the continued support brother, means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Neville
  7 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Well poemed my friend .. 😎👍
  - Damian DeadLove
    7 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
    - Neville
      7 months, 1 week ago
      
      My pleasure entirely .. 👍
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• 8 months, 4 weeks ago

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Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 8 months, 4 weeks ago

Broken Hearted Pen

Poetry

September 19, 2025

10

When days are punctuated with a swirl of a penAnd breaths are held waitingfor the moment that thoughtand reality becomes one Somewhere in my twilight mindWords were written and sentOn wings translucent and etherealSummoning you to me You never answerAs I...

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10 Comments
- Jacob erin-cilberto
  8 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  I have done a fair amount of cursing in my day, Fia.
  But the muse turns a blind ear.
  j.
  - Fia Naturie
    8 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    I agree with you, thank you
- Benjamin Scraps
  8 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Sometimes it feels like certain people are drawn into your life for different reasons, not always for communication or connection, but for maybe even deeper philosophical meanings than even those can provide (I recommend all the Stoics, of course) It always pays to patient…and observant. Good form and thoughtfulness.
  - Fia Naturie
    8 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thank you and yes certain people are drawn into your life for different reasons.;))
- Damian DeadLove
  8 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Brilliantly penned, Fia. Always dig your musings my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
  
  Damian
- Fia Naturie
  8 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Thank you ;))
- Knight
  8 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  A very striking and succinct piece. A fire burns in these verses.
  Regards James
  - Fia Naturie
    8 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, James;))
- emmagreen
  8 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Your writing always conveys your emotions very precisely, emotionally. I mean this: many thanks for sharing what appear to be deep, deep feelings. Can only hope that time will lessen the pain felt as soon as can, Fia.
  - Fia Naturie
    8 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thank you emmagreen ;))
Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 9 months ago

The Whisky shot

Romance

September 18, 2025

2

Okay, Renee, The next shot is the whiskey shot. And I’m telling you, I’m feeling the waves of danger rolling off him over here.” Elene said. Looking over her shoulder at him.“ Your feeling the waves?” I said, smiling...

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2 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  8 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Fia. Sorry, it took me a bit to get to read this. Excellent storytelling my friend, you are truly amazing, cuz. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    8 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thank you for even reading my work. Never rush cuz, we are good
Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

• 9 months ago

Novocain

Poetry

September 17, 2025

23

Your eyes mesmerize meFollowing my every moveStill wonder what you seeHoping that you approveYour lips blazing like fireFeeling them on my skinHow you take me higherWanting it to never end Every time you're nearPushing me to the brinkMy mind is...

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22 Comments
- Tim
  9 months ago
  
  Nice one, Damian. A beautiful women can put a man under a spell that makes him forget any pain.
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Very true, totally agree. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Fia Naturie
  9 months ago
  
  Those are amazing lyrics. Love it;))
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Still working on the music, especially the vocals. Appreciate you, cuz.
    
    Damian
- Crimsin
  9 months ago
  
  hello dearest Damian this is a very great song I can feel your pain❤
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Jacob erin-cilberto
  9 months ago
  
  Second stanza, first line, did you mean “you’re”?
  
  The repetition really works. And the shield me stanza is so clever and just rolls off the tongue.
  Good, good piece of writing.
  j.
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Jacob. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Yes, I did mean “you’re” nice catch. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  9 months ago
  
  Awesome! The rhymes and lyrics are infectious. Like an abscess in a tooth! Nice work dude!
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. It’s got music as well, though I’m still working on the music. I’ll let you check it out when it’s completed, nice to see you my brother. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Willow
  8 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  The interesting thing about this one is that, depending on how it’s read, it could be a woman or an addiction. Very clever use of words here, my friend!
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Nice catch, you’re on the right path. It has a lot of meanings to me as well. This is the song I’m currently putting music to. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Nick DC
  8 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Can heat it already. Great work. Good luck on the solo album.
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Thank you, I need all the luck I can get. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Kelly Scheppers
  8 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Some people shy away from a poem that’s composed of rhyme. I’ve always felt that there’s a finesse to it that has to be refined like a piece of art. You have that quality. It speaks volumes, Damian!
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Kelly. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. What a lovely comment, so kind of you. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- RomaJ
  8 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  The lyrics are so lovely, I feel the intensity of the emotions…the push and pull, the thrill and the ache. and the repeated chorus of “sweet novocain” lingers like a haunting, addictive melody. I’d love to hear you sing this. It’s beautiful
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Well vocally I’m doing my best, I’m not the greatest singer. lol. I’ll share the song when it’s complete. Thanks so much for your support. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Damian DeadLove
  8 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I like that it has multiple meanings, I always dig those kind of writes. Bon Jovi style, that’s a unique way of putting it, but
  I like it. Thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Neville
  7 months, 1 week ago
  
  I sense there is more to this than presently meets the eye .. Good luck with production .. I suspect it will do well ..
  Neville 😎👍
  - Damian DeadLove
    7 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I will admit there are multiple meanings to this one. That’s the beauty of words, In my opinion. I need all the luck I can find, thanks for offering some. lol. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Neville
  7 months, 1 week ago
  
  My absolute pleasure ..
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