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PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos) wrote a new post

• 3 months, 3 weeks ago

Bureaucratic Surrealism

Poetry

May 11, 2026

5

That sacred national art form where paperwork becomes myth, elephants file complaints, and the universe waits for a stamp that never arrives. Keep it dry, absurd, and unmistakably lost. The elephant’s trunkcannot be servedwithout Form 32‑B,signed by three departmentsthat no longer...

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1 Comment
- PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos)
  2 months, 1 week ago
  
  Thanks Damian.
Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 3 months, 3 weeks ago

Standing Still

Poetry

May 9, 2026

11

What would happen if time stood still Would a tear still drop Would the heart still beat Would that moment still be etched in memory Words can never be taken back When both cheeks are slapped there is no other to give Wounds that are...

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11 Comments
- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  3 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Nice write Fia.
  
  I’m not sure if time even exists in the universe…..seems like a human construct.
  - Fia Naturie
    3 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    It might be. I find it weird its never enough time. Thank you Peter 😊
- M.E
  3 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Unfortunately some live in snow globes. Frozen in the same memories and misfortunes.
  A well written, thought provoking poem, with a good concept. Well done, Fia! “)
  - Fia Naturie
    3 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Snow globes …well that’s a thought. To be stuck in that one time and place
- Damian DeadLove
  3 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    3 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thank you Damian. Im trying new ways to inspire myself. 😊
- Duhsjaak
  3 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Chère F.,
  How have you done this, with almost each line/sentence a different perspective.
  You always seem to surprise me and it looks like maybe it’s surprising you that you do.
  What a lovely way to start a new week!
  Love it to bits!
  Warm greetings, Gus
  - Fia Naturie
    3 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    It is inspiring me. Pushing me a bit to see things differently. Thank you Gus 😊
- Sappho (Elke)
  3 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  To me, time as a gift. None of us knows, how long their lives will last. I think, it is most important to use the gift of time we receive to find out who we are, why we are here and how to live a life in harmony and at peace with ourselves and all of creation.
  A well written and meaningful poem, dear Fia!
  - Fia Naturie
    3 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thank you so much, Elke;))
- Steve Austin
  3 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  No idea
Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 4 months ago

Romeo and the Priest

Short Stories, Uncategorized

May 5, 2026

10

P=Romeo, what makes you so sad? R=My emotions are my own why do you ask? P=I hoped life was treating you kinder than it did before R=Before when? When my love walked out the door. P=Why not open your heart for someone new....

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10 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  4 months ago
  
  Cleverly penned, Fia. Excellent write as always my friend. Dig the Shakespeare vibe, also I’ve always thought you’re amazing at writing dialogue. Nicely done. Appreciate you, Cuz.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    3 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thank you Cuz:))
- Sam Nash
  3 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  nice, I like this… you should develop this into a Series (play)
  - Fia Naturie
    3 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thank you Sam. Really a play? Maybe lol
- Kay-1
  3 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  I love this, Fia. Dito, Sam.
  - Fia Naturie
    3 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thank you Kay-1
- Neville
  3 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  I like new concept poetry & love the fact it is possible to listen to the words although I note this is not your voice Fia .. still it kind of fits with my idea of Romeo’s voice ..
  - Fia Naturie
    3 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thank you Neville. I was sitting here thinking of how he would sound and feel if things were different. I may try my hand at writing a play, but I want his voice to stay true to the original. It’s a thought.
- Sam Dickens
  3 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  All is lost for poor Romeo and he’s doomed to a lonely darkness, then… the clouds break, the sun shines again, and all is well. I love happy endings. Hopefully, it will last.
  - Fia Naturie
    3 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    It’s bright and sunny for Romeo because Juliet’s back huh? lol Thank you Sam;)
Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 4 months ago

There is a Price

Erotica, Poetry

May 1, 2026

8

When you say you want meWell baby there are things we must get straightDepending on how you want to goI’m not an ordinary dish on a plate There are flavors to exploreAvenues you must ventureThere are deep, deep wells in...

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6 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  4 months ago
  
  Thank you . Petter;)
- Fia Naturie
  4 months ago
  
  Oh.. maybe I am submissive to him. (giggling) Thank you Crimsin
- Damian DeadLove
  4 months ago
  
  Passionately penned, Fia. Excellent write as always my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    4 months ago
    
    Thank you Damian;))
- Willow
  4 months ago
  
  Now that’s a woman who knows her worth and isn’t afraid to state it and stand by it. There’s nothing weak about it, fierce is what this declaration is. But cleverly worded and leaving just enough to the imagination that he still has plenty of work to do.
  - Fia Naturie
    4 months ago
    
    Yes you are right. The mind is an aphrodisiac let it go its own path. Thank you Willow;))
redzone posted in the group National Poetry Month

• 4 months ago

The Silence of Words

April 30th, last day of
Poetry Month, arrives
with showers, grey skies,
and sadness. Fitting I
suppose referring to
the old saying, ‘April showers,
May flowers’, those Springtime
colors designed to bring joy,
happiness, and the feeling of
self-worth, of being whole
and seen, alive in wonder.
Instead, this day…Read More

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2 Comments
- Willow
  4 months ago
  
  I’ve found that more often than not, people translate words through whatever filter they’re currently struggling with. It may not have anything to do with us even. But our words have impact, not always how we meant them, and their responses have an equal impact. Words are powerful and because of that, can be dangerous. Even if unintended. I feel this one
  - redzone
    4 months ago
    
    Hi Willow, I really appreciate your comment on this poem. I think your are right about the ‘filter’ of how words land with someone. It’s hard at times, even in real, face to face conversation, but here or on any social media website, it’s even harder. And yes, words are powerful and dangerous. It’s one reason I think, that we write poetry. Thank…Read More
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