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      October’s Sunflowers

      October's SunflowersWhat were once thriving facesturned toward the sun, are now sadand haggard mounds of regrets,memories of how life should have beenlived while young.The gardener with his shears cuts downthe dead lives and tosses themin the fire. The plants...

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      • I like the analogy of no future plant bears parents’ ashes. Until far into the future, in generations to come.

      • sunflowers are my favorite this is bittersweet ❤️

      • A sad, sad core but finely laid language, sir. As a garden designer, etc. I speed to such poems, but think this is the first about sunflowers in the past recent years – so sad to read of their casually tossed passing. That said, they are flung into death – but could have created even more if kept and used. Their tale might have begun a masterpiece had they and your words continued. Along with Fia, would add that not only is the analogy on form, your work has style to the brim. Many thanks for sharing.

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      Birds In a Gilded Age

      Birds in a Gilded AgeWhen the boat from Ireland to America came ashore at EllisIsland, I had my Maine Coon catwith me. Coon cats are the biggestcats but they're not fat.I became a citizen during the timeAmericans had learned there's...

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      Earth Patrol and the Universe

      Earth Patrol and the UniverseIt gets tough fed up with everything,No alternatives.Keep on doing what you hatedoing as long as it pays youyou keep on doing itYou hate it. You have to.No alternatives to that.Opportunity knocked—the mission to the...

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      I always knew

      I was never broken and I didn’t really believe itbut damn, I got tired of hearing that “there was nothing wrong”with how I was

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      • We are made the way we are supposed to be. I understand though

      • I get it beautiful poetess if they didn’t think that there would be no reason for constant reinforcement reminds me of me with my schizophrenia great write just be you you can’t be anyone else ❤️

      • That’s kind of weird isn’t it. It’s like they’re trying to convince you of something before you ask. lol

      • Powerful and poignant.

      • We are born into circumstances. You control how those circumstances affect you. They may burden you. They may show you the right path for
        you. Some people live a glorious life while others struggle to survive. So far, I have survived! I have been broken and I have pieced myself back together. I have taken many wrong roads. I have been very lost at times. Be yourself always.

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      A Poem

        A Poem   oo0oo   Dream like, innuendo breathes deep moving slowly in a heart beat. And then you said, ‘Hi’. Reality flowed quickly from a dream.   What is a dream but a shadow roaming the mind. Illusive, like fire in a red dress dancing bare foot to music only you...

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      • This is sweet with a touch of trouble. “Red Dress” Nice

        • Hi Fia! Oh yes, she was trouble! Thank you for your kind words. And thank you for this Stars Rite poetry site.

      • Hi Curt,

        I really enjoyed this – it has such a dreamy, floating quality, I love how it moves from the soft, floating imagery of dreams into the sudden jolt of reality. “And then you said,” ‘Hi.’” The image of a dream as “fire in a red dress dancing barefoot” is striking and memorable. It feels like a brief, beautiful moment where fantasy and reality touch. Dreams inspire me. This piece resonates with me

        • Exactly RomaJ. Thank you. If I remember correctly, this dream woke me up. Unfortunately, there was no “reality” of her dancing in a red dress, barefoot or otherwise. Oh well. Dreams do inspire. It inspired this poem. Thanks again for your kind words and visit.
          -Curt

      • This is somewhat like Déjà vu to me. Something kind of jolts you, but in a way, you’ve felt it before.

        • To be honest, I was roaming through some of my notebooks and found this poem. So in one sense, yes, there was some Deja vu involved. But it was a dream I had back then (2009) that found its way on paper.

          Thank you, Tim, for your comment and perspective on this poem.
          -Curt

      • Beautifully penned, Curt. Amazing write my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.

        Damian

      • Thank you, Damian, for your wonderful comment, your visit, and your ‘welcome’ to SR. I am glad to be here. As I get more acclimated to the site, I will do a lot more reading. Reading some of your creations is near the top of the Read List.
        Thanks again,
        -Curt

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