ops sorry I already crossed the lake… you have to swim… as I said your poetry is always amazing

this is abosutely gorgeous lovely Fia this moved me greatly ❤️

Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write with some deep layers my friend. This gives me musing vibes.. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

Oh wow…this one took me to a memory place. Amazing, Fia

I enjoyed this,Fia.

Man, Willow the thought and precision of this piece. I feel old wounds seep. Brilliant

Thank you

Thank you, my friend

Thank you, Peter

Powerful work. Alive with passion.

Thank you, Thomas

Before anything else is the song by You?! or it’s an AI made? Because I was AMAZED by how professional it is, both song and poem! You are indeed talented as Damian said.

Outstanding my friend, outstanding with how powerful the impact of your words is on us, how strong, profound and real the agnish is in your words. it might took a lifetime to get through abuse or trauma, people might not understand this but You don’t need them to understand. I’ve learned that You can stay incompletely healed, that’s okay as long as You can be aware where this affects your life, what actions and decisions do You make because of it. perfection doesn’t mean to be flawless, but to accept this flawless and embrace it, to understand that we are eventually in this 3D world and even if our souls are high and free we are still somehow locked with mundane limits. Sorry if I talked alot but your words inspired it. A brilliant work beautiful friend🤍 peace 🕊️

Well..you talk about me musing. Damian this makes you think and think hard. Favorite line
“Freedom’s a fading illusion masked as a tomb”

You have nailed a hard and important topic with this one, Damian. The majority suffers at the hands and decisions of the few, and in my cynicism, I feel it will always be that way. We must not allow them to distract us overly much (conveniences, sports, politics, religion) or the sooner our end will be upon us. In my mind the song: In The Year 2525, is ever more relevant. Exemplary piece, my friend!

Keep writing the good stuff
Clay

this is very powerful it’s true what you say I love this because you brought it to light what everyone knows but don’t talk about ❤️

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Peter. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Indeed. After all there is no honor amongst thieves. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Angel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. The elite have been fueled by greed and power throughout history. The thing about technology is it cuts both ways. What was once done secretly behind closed doors or in some backroom deal gets leaked because there is no honor amongst thieves, never was. Digital eyes are watching everywhere these days and secrets get exposed by those same eyes meant to keep an eye on John Q. Public. But that’s just my two cents. lol. Appreciate you.

Damian

These things are so much on my mind these days. My daughter tells me we can’t move or breathe without them knowing but we can’t stop. If we give up, they win and that’s what they’re counting on. So we keep picking at the cracks in their armor and building our community. They’ll destroy themselves eventually. I’d like to see them go down sooner than later. Another fantastically pointed piece, my friend

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Sometimes I really miss the analog days.. Appreciate you.

Damian

A frightening rendition of the truth.
Regards
James

I fear an increasing number of us are having our eyes opened for us big time .. its a crazy world out here isn’t it just .. Great ink Damian .. Neville

We are controled whether we are aware of it or not, the technology, economy, fear, etc etc… What’s that AI but soon to replace human! unfortunately a Crazy crazy world! But what I believe that after the complete mess comes harmony, after violence comes peace, after injustice comes the justice. You always carry the world on your shoulders Damian my friend, do take care of You and remember that You are not alone🤍

Powerful and poignant. Spot on, my friend.

Damian we are living in an Orwellian society and your poem packs a mighty punch. You write the reality all around us with eyes that see into the machine. Your poem is precise in its illustration of the dystopian universe we are not approaching but are already living in. Appreciate you.

John

Most excellent, Fia.

Passionately penned, Fia. Another excellent write with a spicy vibe my friend. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

Chère F.,
Is it my imagination or are you writing better and better every time?

My favorite piece:
I will not say

What you need to hear

I will only come closer

Look into my eyes

See what takes hold

A proof of your calm self worth I think.

Simply wonderful!
Warm regards, Gus

“Fall into me

Or lose

Your moment”
Thats a no brainer, Fia. A wonderful write. “)

Sultry, subtle, and provocative within the same moment. There is a gently palpable and urgent touch present in each line that is welcome and enveloping. Absolutely fantastic write, Fia!

Clay