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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreThe sun struggles to rise The water is flat The stillness of the air Casting blindly Instinctively know where it lands Let it sink into the depths Invade a secret Slow movement The soft under tow pulls A grip tightens Give and take increases Angle diverges One last powerful pull Culminating into...
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You sure you went to the right place? ☺️
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I never knew fishing could be so much fun…
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Yes it is😁
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. This was a clever and sexy write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian 😊
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Catch anything?
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Yes the fish called the big O. Lol
Thanks Keith
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Did you use bait? Hahaha
A beautifully written piece! “)-
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I did use bait (wink)
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Sounds very therapeutic 😌 hehe
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It is…I just need to hold that rod tight;))
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Damn! Fia, you caught me off guard with that hahahaha 😆 😂
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All I could do was smile at the cleverness of this allegorical vibe.
One of my favorite poetic alleys.
Sexy, sexyNaaj
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I made you smile? Great.
Thank you, Naaj
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Oh that smile says a lot at the end.
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Thank you,Wally;))
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You did say something eloquent 💋
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Drieks wrote a new post
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Read MoreYeah,Vicky.I left a hicky on her neck.Back in the city,I wrote my number on the cheque.Very risky,like tempting Russians in roulette.Plenty sticky.Oh Vicky.Chest of might.Catch of delight.Eye sight’s over-pleasured,break my dyke.Pluck the brains back of the matte blackbarrel, left...
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This kicks ass. Marvelous lyrics and a wicked image.
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Thank you 🙏🏻
It means a lot coming from you.
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Thank you Adira! Yeah it’s been a blast.
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Phenomenal lyrics, Drieks. Nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS wrote a new post
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Read MoreExplaining to A Leaf~ loneliness ~With winds stalking me,leaves tremble at my approach,they are afraid of the coldthat follows:and, in hushed rustling whispers,they ask, as I pass,“Why is it you’re not afraid?”Un-answering, my feet march on,trodding on their fallen...
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I’m hugely impressed with your understanding of poetic element.
So, you are Richard the Rascal. Let me put that down. This is another amazing piece with emphasis on personification and symbolism. There’s obviously a metaphorical significance to the changing season, specifically fall to winter. It’s interesting to note that while you give leaves many characteristics of humans in this piece, they lack the unique capacity for understanding… at least, that’s the perspective of the speaker. Your final stanza is a fantastic summation.This is top shelf material, Richard.
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Graciously spake, Dear Poetess🥂
Your coaxing words are sweet as honeysuckle to a hopeful bard’s susceptible ear … most especially, from one so poetically accomplished and sophisticated as yourself.
A few devices I tend to favor are color, texture, analogy, simile, and nature … I’m so pleased you’ve recognized their presence in this rather poignant little piece.Thank you ever-so warmly, Lady DK, for your always welcomed accolades! ⁓ Richard the Rascal🖌
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Hi, M’Good Friend! ✌🏼
How great it is, Tim, to be greeted here with one of your appreciatively expressed and inspiringly encouraging reviews, that always seems to grasp my poetry’s core essence.
Yes, like You, I tend to enjoy a good dose of metaphoric imagery in my pieces.Thank you, Syr, for enjoying this rather sad Free Verse piece! ⁓ Rascal🖌
PS: On your recommendation, I had to check the site out … do you know how one edits their poetry?
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Thanks, Buddy👌
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Graciously spake, Dear Poetess🥂
Your coaxing words are sweet as honeysuckle to a hopeful bard’s susceptible ear … most especially, from one so poetically accomplished and sophisticated as yourself.
A few devices I tend to favor are color, texture, analogy, simile, and nature … I’m so pleased you’ve recognized their presence in this rather poignant little piece.Thank you ever-so warmly, Lady DK, for your always welcomed accolades! ⁓ Richard the Rascal🖌
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Your fishing is different from mine.😉