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Read MoreWhen a calm sky turns grey And a whispered wind cuts When the peace you need to stay But vanishes like dust Every beauty on a rose Is kissed with lust The roots never grow Past the decayed crust Word sung in a resounding hymn Played with notes Eco'd...
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Thank you, Sam😊
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This is an amazing poem, dear Fía!
Abracadabra: As I speak I create!-
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Thank you Sappho.😊
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Absolutely love the flow of this piece! It is reminiscent of the legends of old. Stellar write, my friend.
Clay
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Thank you,Clay 😊
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Nicely done Fia…
Powerful excursion…
<#3 Cipher
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Thank you, Cipher 😊
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Lyrical and thoughtful. It has, for me, a distinctive Autumnal feel to it.
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Thank you, Jim😊
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Incredible flow, it has a lyrical vibe. Excellent write, cuz. This is next level great. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you ,Damian ☺️
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![Profile picture of Tim]()
A nice one Fia. Sentiments and feelings should be created with positive thoughts in mind.
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Thank you, Tim;))
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This feels a bit like an invocation, a psalm. Almost spiritual in its expression. Just…wow
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Thank you, Willow;))
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This has a very Poe vibe. Has layers and takes a bit of thought.
Wonderful ink.
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Thank you, Nick. I love Poe’s work
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Exquisitely poemed my friend .. Neville 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
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Thank you, Neville;))
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Read MoreYour love is a daggerso plunge it deep into my heart.I cannot stand and do not want mere surface.Drive your blade indont pull it out.Know that in time my heart will absorb itand absorb you. And my legs will part...
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this made me smile dearest Benny great write 💕
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Your smile made me smile…thanks for reading.🙏
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I enjoyed the playful, lightly sinister nature of this. Admittedly, no.. I didn’t see that couplet coming lol.
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No one in their right or indeed write mind wants to feel down or depressed .. I found this post/poem very much to my liking indeed it was compelling .. Kind regards, Neville
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When you’ve been there, you know
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Peter, this touched my heart. Suffering is used to refine and strengthen us, much like a blacksmith uses a furnace to refine precious metals. Stay strong. 🌹🌾🕊️
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Alexandria et al
Thanks for reading and the comments.Its nice when others understand not just the words but the author.
Love you all
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I’ve had my share of dark thoughts. I don’t want to go back to that place. One can only hope the future is better.
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OMG…. This is one of your very very best