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Read MoreWe understand pausing to catch our breath...its never easy..."Even breathing carries a price..."Sunrise, sunsetshared and alone -I speak of coffeeand mistsshadows and the windstrees, birds, passing cars...I wonder of friends,life, memories -new and old...I hurt sometimes -real and hard;...
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This is quite a good poem. It’s thought inducing, but not overly manic like some. I really like it.
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I appreciate your pausing with one of my writes…
CHris
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This is really good, felt a little sad reading it but that shows it’s good.
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Poets allow us to “feel” what we have experienced behind our eyes… Thank you Fia for you pausing and sharing thoughts.
Chris
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Mornings are hardest, I think. Just placing both feet on the floor is a victory. That first cup of coffee does more for me than I can say. We’re all in this thing called life, together. Thankfully, this venue offers us a human connection. Hang in there, Chris!
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Definitely there as the alternative IS unacceptable… chuckling here – Hi Kell…
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Read MoreA Book Report using Cliff's Notes ( a non-scholarly review) The Whale filled several hundred pages the one-legged captain harpooned his dream and in the end went overboard with his quest and then in jest Ishmael told the others to call him finding later on that to be the first...
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lol, My nightmare book report was Silas Marner. I remember those days of summer that were stolen from us.
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Oh brother…they gave us such boring books to read.
Fia, thank you for replying to this piece.
j.
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Oh, thank God! For a moment I thought this would be some dry learned lecture, then the first verse got me chuckling. When Ishmael asked the others to call him, I just howled and my wife came back here and asked me what was wrong. I told her, “I’ll just have to read this to you.” So I did, and we both roared with laughter all the way through. Thank you so much for this one, Jake. We really needed that. You have any more like this? I can go put on the popcorn!
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ha ha….I don’t even lecture to my classes. All satirical and glad that it could give you a few chuckles. Thanks for letting me know this.
There is truth in this in the fact of me hating Moby Dick with a passion.
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Just please give us more of these. You now have a niche market your fans are literally howling for. Doing anything else could be dangerous.
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Cleverly penned, Jacob. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian.
j.
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Hi Chris, such an honest write. Mornings can be and are the often the most difficult part of the day for some. I hear you. Moved by your words and the struggle I felt contained within. The title says it all.
The other Chris