I love the this. This had me swaying and relating to the words. I agree keep these coming.

Powerfully penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics as always my friend. Your flow and wordplay are simply amazing. Love the reggae vibe it accompanied your words smoothly. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you so much Gus! 🙏

It does feel awful to kill a living animal but they are dangerous and they steal food. I hope your okay.

Thanks Fia for reading.
I really just wanted it to leave but rats arent inclined to do that.Im ok with it now but I still wasn’t thrilled about killing it.
🙏

Interesting take on Eden. I like this

Powerfully penned, Brandon. I concur with Fia.. None the less this is an excellent write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

Nicely said…..more like that please.

This is cool. I relate to the nervous energy at times I just keep going.;))

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Another excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Chère C.,
A little rhyme replying your lovely poem:

This photo’s truly showing
What I always knowed*
Parking on the sidewalk is
How to define off road

So rope in a big wheel
and you’ll be certain of
One big wheel will be enough
If you want lasting love

Clumsy? Yes!
But so what!
There’s more than enough people who take themselves too seriously…

*Dion Dimucci’s past sense of knowing
Warm greetings, Gus