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NAVINA posted in the group National Poetry Month
A STORM’S MIMIC EMOTIONS
Why does it rain?
When I’m sad?
Does it feel my pain?
When things go bad?How can it last long?
I’m still crying
When will it be gone?
The outside is pouring.Where is the sun?
To feel better
I just wanna go out and run
Even with this dark weatherI try to smile a bit
And when I do
I see the r…Read More![]()
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I know the timing is right for tears on everyone and how the rain comes in too. Thank you Fia, glad you liked.
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![Profile picture of Atticus Abbey]()
Most rule books are written by fools. A good example are the actors you see in life. At church, the shopping center or on TV. Be who you are and not someone’s marrioette.
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Tganks 😁
I don’t plan an changing for no one.
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The Truth – from Your Heart – great who-gives-a-fuck-what-they-say writing. HJ
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![Profile picture of Lizz]()
Thanks So true.
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
This is so good. You should always be you <3
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Thank you 😁.
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hello lovely Liz I am myself and I will tell you I’m not liked…evern God grows weary of me believe it or not he says I complain to much and he tells me to fuck off sometimes lol..be yourself who else are you going to be? I will continue being me too great write ❤️
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Thank you 😊
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Lizz. Outstanding write that’s direct and to the point my friend. Never be afraid to be who are you.. I’m flawed myself with lots of quirks as well, I fucking embrace those flaws, because that’s a big part of what makes me who I am. It doesn’t define me it’s just part of me. If that makes sense? lol. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you 😊 yes it makes sense we need to embrace all of who we are.
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This is good informative poem. My son has dyslexia and though it takes him a little longer to read things, it does not change who he is. I love when I can relate to a piece
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You are you and that is all that matters. Great poem.
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you sure do shine beautiful Jackie I leave out whole words my brain says are there you have my sympathy ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Jackie. Amazing write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreRewriting Memory There was always a kind of sadness in your eyes Even when you were baby and looked at me There was always this emotive tone in your voice So young and yet so full of melancholy In those days there was an...
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Oh I love the fact you understand that he is on a journey of healing. Nice piece
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Thank you Fia.
Each poem for this year’s NaPoWriMo challenge was very much reflection and memory, especially with close relationships.
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Powerfully penned, Wally. Another excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you very much Damian. This is one of those writes that’s close to me.
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It does feel that way when I am sad. It’s like it wants to cry for me. Lovely