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    dwell

    darkness dwells inside anger tremblesa lull in my speech means I am thinkingdevouring the light which shinesshrinking psychedelic thinkingstrobes of misery spinmy thoughts expandwith ideas of hurt to recallmy mind looks at the worldgood with fangs and clawsthe dark...

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    A Blossom Fell

    Under the slumping shoulders of the cafe's awningI watched tiny rain circles loosely burst in puddleson the ground whilemy hair lightly waved fromSeptember's weary winds.Nat King Cole sang softly"A Blossom Fell,"on small hanging speakers when she strolled byquickly catching...

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    • beautifully written I felt this 💕

    • Best revenge, live happily ever happy without them holding a place inside you. Easy to say, I know. Yet, writing it out is also great therapy and makes you breathe better. Our success comes from trial and error. You succeed regardless.
      Write it out amigo.

    • Beautifully penned, Tim. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • I note you still have it .. exquisitely poemed good sir .. Regards to both you n ya pen .. Neville

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    Kill It...

    "what doesn't kill you...makes you stronger"or so they say it might be truebut I'll tell you what I thinkit sounds like an abuser's excuseas usual...shifting the blame...to you ya know what else it creates?scars that never healfears that never weakentriggers unseen...sneaking...

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    • hello beautiful Willow it seems we are on similar wavelengths as of late the world has made me cautious and fear overtakes… great write you are not alone ❤️

      • The world is definitely not a welcoming place these days. I find myself retreating further from it every day. Thank you, Brenda 🧡

    • POWERFUL AND POIGNANT.

    • That phrase neglects something; It hides the trauma that stirred the mantra to be uttered. It doesn’t really make you stronger. It makes you “on guard”.
      Your words ring true, Willow. Let it out and stand proud of it.

      • It’s reminiscent of “suck it up, buttercup” to me. They do the abusing & then try to say they’re doing us a favor by “toughening” us up. Scar tissue is just as sensitive…just that nothing grows there anymore. Thank you, Styxian

    • Into the book it belongs! Mic Drop, Willow. I got goosebumps! Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • I’ve been much in my head of late. Kinda dark place in the world these days. My own demons are at least familiar. Thank you, my friend

    • Mic drop!! felt this too deeply love..

      🌹

      • Why are there so damn many of us? And the number just keeps going up. Thank you

    • Like the joker said “Whatever doesn’t kill you makes you stranger”. I think that’s a bit more accurate haha.

      Great ink.

    • Amazing work, Willow. I find myself blushing and cursing myself for never looking at that slogan from this point of view. I gave no thought of that phrase being anything more than absurd for its stupidity. Not that I never knew the pain — or felt it from my father’s hand, or saw it when my mother lay upon the floor with one leg jutting outward at an odd angle. I think I preferred to ignore it, not from shame or ignorance, but because the pain is still there, buried deep within my mind, still sticking in the knife. Thank you for this.

      • This is why I write. Because those images haunt. And everyday nonsensical phrases take on different weight when you look at them from the other side. I can never not be fractured. I’m a complete kaleidoscope but if I can draw light to bits and pieces, make people see differently, than maybe someone else won’t experience it later that day. Or they might recognize the truth in what is being said and know they’re not alone in feeling it. We don’t change the world in leaps and bounds, we change it in moments and inches. But it does change. Thank you, FlatDaddy

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    indigo

    salacious moment opens to meinviting me to playsecrets whispered entertainthoughts of lust metaphors for the braintittilating in their presentationdesire grows and passion groansit is the darkest magic I knowseducing the elementsbringing the windsmy beauty covered by the starsshimmering in...

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    New Love

    She came in quiet,black tights hugging her legs,a grey sweatshirt draping low,her laughter stitched in caricaturesof friends she’d left behind in school.Beneath it, a whisper of color,blue-green, soft against her skin.No bra,her breasts, so small,yet to him, they were...

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    • A firestorm of beauty and passion as I read and this unfolded. Tenderly written with exquisite attention to the encounter told both emotionally and physically in a dance. Loved reading this.

      John

      • Thanks for appreciating the dance…and taking time to leave a comment; I am grateful.

    • Hoi hoi
      Hope this finds you well.

      I’ve always thanked the forces, liberating us from the
      Love
      Love me do
      You
      Know
      I love you
      Tyranny.

      Looking back his Bobness only went half way…
      Beautiful writes like this one do the rest.
      Thank you for writing and posting.
      Kind regards, Gus

      • Gus…thanks for the kind comment. I’ll always be true.

    • A tendering, trembling new love indeed. Everyone can relate to this piece. Wonderfully done, RPM! Into the list it goes!

    • You can beat a drum and an egg of course but you just can’t beat a nice bit of gentle well stated erotica .. Neville

    • Ooh, love that comment. Thanks a bunch!

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