Hauntingly penned, Brenda. A powerful dark write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

My word, you really have entered into the spirit of this most hauntingly chilling time of year .. Bravo & likewise awarded the 🖤 of horror .. Kindest Regards, Neville 😎👍

Well, this makes me think of a fallen angel, caught in the dilemma of righteousness and vengence. By the grace of God, perhaps, yet there is an underlying energy here too. I like the whirlwind of thoughts going on here. I can sense your struggle through your words, quite easily. Well expressed Crimson.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks for the info, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Tremendous work. Gripping.

Hauntingly penned, Tim. Logic over valor my friend. Excellent write you’re a great storyteller. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is good and had me laughing with the pedal to the metal.

Tim, this took me into the haunted rooms of that house and feeling the disquieted vibes as I read. Truly a master work of short story telling. Your descriptions of the broken window and dusty curtains made the scene come alive for me in full visual effect. As the story unfolded I enjoyed the narration and how it pulled me into the story. Truly great ghost story telling that had me fascinated unto that great ending where the message appears on his phone.

John