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Read MoreDomainWe get it in downloads and write in clockwork elves Clockwork machines manifested from clockwork selvesSo many Dali clocks on So many shelves. How we made &Make. Letters to break the fetters and make The soul: Shake. The Earth: Quake.Writing-ignitinginShake n bake, baked. I want...
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Thank you Del…
Hoping to get back into the routine of writing…
Very much appreciated…
After I wrote this…
I was thinking about poetry and prose…
Rhyme and off rhyme…
Or like, in this piece, I feel this sort of
approach, with like…Internal rhyme and rhyme shifts…
Well I was just thinking how it effects
the senses…
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I’m digging the Dali within this. I can see the melting clock as I read this. Yet you’ve awakened that clock, for one last tock!
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Thank you Styx…
Very much appreciated…
Gotta love the Dali… 🙂
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Read MoreNot for Lulz for LightIt is a special kind of alchemy, followingsigns – To which – Most are blind. Drivenby vision. Possessed by mission, assigned.Mission: Divine. Decision, defined. Acrosspathways of a diamond mind to forever findPoetic skies, in which...
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This is well said. I hope humanity will wake up and see that we are here on this earth together so why go after each other?
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Me too, Fia, me too
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Jackie
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Powerfully penned, Jackie. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for visiting Damian
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Jackie
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Monster
Teeth bared
He’s scared
His mind’s a mess
Trying to handle with finesse
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A laudable effort, Fia 👍
I love your imaginative theme and how you’ve creatively made this form your own with your unique touches that catch the reader’s mind’s-eye … enjoyably interesting and entertaining.
Having said that, I’ll also mention a couple of techy issues:
1. Syllable counts are out in L3 & 4 (should be 2/2), and L6 (should each be a…Read More
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I’m digging the whole vibe/quake in this.
And I enjoyed the opening, the use of the work clockwork.
Like there are different gears that shift our writing – hence earthquake!
Just fantastic amigo!