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    dear beauty

    dear beauty please bestow on me your essenceso I will glow with the feelinga lovely fountain springs eternal in mesuch succinct endeavor, to garner your favormy thoughts dance on the mistsan ethereal lass before meconjuring my immortal lustswith a...

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    Love the beat. a head banger

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    forever

    speaks the night of breath and formcold we turn to stonein our dire hour left aloneno one to atone but ourselvesby this sigh I speakof lost days and full onesmaudlim and melancholy I roamsinister faith, teaches us to hopehonest...

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    • I’ve missed reading your introspective heart. Beautiful as always.

      • hello beautiful Betty I’ve missed you very much out of all the people I know I’m happy this poem spoke to you I hope you are doing well me I’m wandering ❤️thank you for being here…

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write as always my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    The Terror in the Community

    The Terror In The Community. The community was designed as a euphoric cornucopia of green, lush plant life, all underwater in a 25-gallon tank. Introducing into this tank were three. You heard me, three fanciful goldfish. One was an Oranda that...

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    • Cleverly penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend, I always enjoy your amazing storytelling. Appreciate you, cuz.

      Damian

    • Fantastic. Love it, Fia.

    • Why not just flush Maurice?? Get rid of the non team player! maybe he can go rule the sewers or something, LOL.
      I’m just being logical! Or put his ass with a male Beta (Japanese Fighting fish). No more Maurice!

    • Chère F.,
      I’d love it if this would find you mellow and at ease, just before the weekend.

      I’ve read your poem and I don’t understand it.
      blunt Dutch analysis.
      But I love the kiss by Brancusi (singer museum Leiden the Netherlands) without understanding too.
      I love some of Rothko’s work too.

      Understanding isn’t always about what you/I can grasp at any time!
      I love this write of yours and I think it’s raking me a little more time.

      So:
      Please be patient with me!
      I’ll be back, I promise! Have a very nice weekend…..
      Warm Waving from a distance, Gus

    • Cook Maurice and have him as an appetizer. He’d be with you forever. Great story Fia.

    • This starts playful but slowly tightens into something darker.
      Power and cruelty don’t need much space to show themselves.

    • Clean slate works also. Lol

    • I think you’ll need to build a little underwater jail and keep Maurice there as punishment.
      This was great, yes it’s frustrating that your fishes kept dying but I love how you told this story not just as the observer but almost like a deity that you had power but they kept dying on you while you weren’t looking.
      Awesome work.

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    hush

    silently simmering inside my dreadalone in the feeling I sulkit is for me to face...the bleakmy sanity doesn't allow deep bondsmy behaviour dictates who sticks aroundthere are those I reachthen the pack gathers round and shames my favored person...

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    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend, it always helps knowing someone understands and has our back. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Chère C.,
      In the Netherlands, we believe that everyone has ‘een rugzakje’. A backpack, but the addition of ‘je’ can’t be translated as far as I know. It’s there to indicate that sometimes it’s heavy and sometimes less. If I make any sense.

      In this rugzakje we all carry things from present and past (mostly).
      The thing for others, is to accept other rugzakjes too. I hear what you say, and at the same time I know that there will be more people who will support and embrace you.

      The days will be getting longer. I hope that more hours of light will strengthen you.

      Warm regards, Gus

    • A great piece written for your husband. Nicely executed!

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