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I appreciate the read and the comment, Fia. I am happy you enjoyed both!
Thank you for stopping by.
Clay
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great flow and subject matter very beautiful ❤️
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Thank you, my friend! It was a gorgeous day and place that inspired it.
I appreciate you taking the time.
Clay
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Hello, Her. You nailed it, my child-self was indeed a’visiting. It brings me true joy to know this poem was helpful for you!
You may borrow my rose-tinted glasses anytime.
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Carefree, peaceful, a joyous, tranquil vibe. Nice work.
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Thank you, Visions_of_Insanity, you captured this poem’s spirit perfectly. I keep wishing I could return to that afternoon!
I appreciate the visit
Clay
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Read More...and I am left here, in this stream of wakefulness,with only these two relics, polished clean by repetition."Sincerely, goodnight."They are pressed together into a single, aching scripture,the haunting prose of everything I lost,and everything you truly, devastatingly meantbefore you...
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Atticus Abbey started the topic Angels of Paranoia in the forum Collaborations
The amber liquid in my glass was a snarky cathedral for small terrible things. To circumvent my taste for Manischewitz, aged in delirium. They were there swimming in the smoky depths—the haunting angels of Paranoia, fallen not from grace,
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Read More𝔄 𝔰𝔥𝔞𝔡𝔬𝔴 𝔠𝔯𝔢𝔢𝔭𝔰, 𝔱𝔥𝔬𝔲𝔤𝔥 𝔫𝔬 𝔩𝔞𝔪𝔭 𝔡𝔬𝔱𝔥 𝔯𝔢𝔳𝔢𝔞𝔩, 𝔄 𝔭𝔥𝔞𝔫𝔱𝔬𝔪 𝔡𝔯𝔢𝔞𝔡, 𝔞 𝔱𝔢𝔯𝔯𝔬𝔯 ℑ 𝔠𝔞𝔫 𝔣𝔢𝔢𝔩, 𝔚𝔦𝔱𝔥𝔦𝔫 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔠𝔞𝔳𝔢𝔯𝔫𝔰 𝔴𝔥𝔢𝔯𝔢 𝔪𝔶 𝔯𝔢𝔞𝔰𝔬𝔫 𝔩𝔦𝔢𝔰, 𝔄 𝔠𝔥𝔦𝔩𝔩𝔦𝔫𝔤 𝔰𝔬𝔩𝔞𝔠𝔢, 𝔪𝔬𝔠𝔨𝔦𝔫𝔤 𝔪𝔶 𝔰𝔬𝔣𝔱 𝔰𝔦𝔤𝔥𝔰. ℑ𝔱 𝔰𝔱𝔦𝔯𝔰 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔥𝔞𝔠𝔨𝔩𝔢𝔰 𝔬𝔣 𝔪𝔶 𝔴𝔢𝔞𝔯𝔶 𝔪𝔦𝔫𝔡, 𝔄...
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I like the rhyming scheme and the poem.