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Read MoreIn shadows of night the rose grows, the bloom, like a fist unclenching, petals soft as a whisper, against the wind's blow, holding its breath. As the moon spills gold into the shallow creek— with a scent of rain and...
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Thank you, my friend.
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People often say how beautiful and soft is a rose, but I always saw something deeper and here You’ve expressed it,That’s the strength of the rose, she stays kind in all the ugliness, she yeilds with the hardships… she grows with beauty even in the darkness. a power those only with pure hearts can acknowledge. Thank You for the lovely read my friend.
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Thank you for reading.
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Thank you, Damian.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Monster
Teeth bared
He’s scared
His mind’s a mess
Trying to handle with finesse
But to no avail-this ship has sailed
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A laudable effort, Fia 👍
I love your imaginative theme and how you’ve creatively made this form your own with your unique touches that catch the reader’s mind’s-eye … enjoyably interesting and entertaining.
Having said that, I’ll also mention a couple of techy issues:
1. Syllable counts are out in L3 & 4 (should be 2/2), and L6 (should each be a…Read More
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Fia Naturie posted in the group The Art of Poetry
(My poem for the picture)
No meaning
I sit here thinking
Life has little meaning
Once I lived in luxury
Now I live in memory
What is the meaning of my life?
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Fia Naturie posted in the group Music is Art
Hi, I just wanted to start off by saying thank you for joining. A singer that stuck in my mind, and I thought I would talk about is Toni Basil. She sang this song, “Mickey,” That came out in 1982and I could not get it out of my head as a kid. It’s funny how when I listen to the song as an adult, I get the meaning, but as a child, I was like…Read More
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There are a lot of songs out there that as a kid, I didn’t always get the meaning of until later in life. I remember the song well though. I was 7 years old when this came out. So I didn’t get the meaning at that age either. But the cheerleader outfit made sense, the lyrics are sang as if it is a cheer routine, with the handclaps also giving it…Read More
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This is an outstanding poem, dear Abbey! The imagery, the metaphors, the soothing atmosphere – everything is beautiful!