I couldn’t help but giggle @ ‘living in they mommas basement’…

This is the definition of toxic.

You laid it all out there, vivid and raw.

Loved the Rod Serling tying that was very clever!

Great ink, Naj
Looking forward to more

Powerfully penned, Naaj. This was kick ass, a raw spill my friend. Loved the “Rod Sterling” element. Appreciate you.

Damian

Great piece. Loved the last stanza in particular.
Impeccable flow.

hello dearest Naajir this is some powerful writing…California rent is no better and sometimes we hate each other…💕great write…

Yikes…yeah, watch the spaghetti…

Oof.. it’s one thing to have swamp puss…but eating her spaghetti too? Some people have nothing to lose…lol, I enjoyed the humor in this spill..although it’s so real and so raw. Well done Naaj! xx
~P.G💋

Haha…Glad you enjoyed Dragon-Fire.
Thx for the support

Naaj

damn. that fifth stanza hit hard. excellent write.

Great penwork Brenda…

Powerfully penned, Brenda. A great spill my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Heavy stuff. But I expect nothing less from you, Brenda

Razor sharp ink… Thank you for sharing.

“It is with great sacrifice that I put myself away
pretending all is fine
My depression is deep
It drinks from the sunflowers
until even they fail to shine”

You paint Van Gogh with the brush stroke of words 🌼

You can take even melancholy and turn it into high art This has such exquisite emotional resonance for me as I read tonight. You have great talent my friend and it shines even through your dark clouds.

John