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thank you graciously dearest Damian good morning ❤️
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This poem is a vivid, honest look at desire – full of passion but also quiet vulnerability. The contrast between the “neon God” and “bluebirds” is striking and memorable.
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thank you graciously lovely poetess ❤️
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I feel these words. They are otherworldly, uttered from another world beyond the one we inhabit.
Kind regards
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thank you graciously dearest James what a beautiful thought ❤️
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Spooky and spellbinding, crimsin. I like it. You capture the magic within the spell. 🙂
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hello dearest Tim thank you graciously I’m happy you felt the magic❤
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First line fifth stanza, did you mean “summon”?
This was fascinating…and as Tim said…very spooky.
I love the idea of “stalking my vision”!
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hello dearest Jacob thank you graciously yeah I meant summon…lol ❤️
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Powerful work. You nailed it.
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thank you graciously dearest Thomas ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreA caring home was an old man's residenceDementia robbed him of remembranceThough his memory was dark and greyHis wife came to visit him every dayShe did her best but it seemed certainNothing would lift forgetting's curtain She brought their dog...
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Oh dear…..honesty is not always the best policy.
Poignant but beautiful.❤️-
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Suffering from dementia is hard – for the patient and for their family as well. I know a woman who stood by her mentally disturbed husband strong as a rock. She told me, ‘I know who he is at his core, that’s enough for me!
Thank you so much for reading and writing such a kind comment, ‘ dear Peter!
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So sad and then that ending…a surprise smile.
Your writing is vivid, Elke. I was there.
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Thank you very much for your kind comment, dear Jacob!
Did you work at a caring home?-
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No but for his last couple years, my dad was in a dementia unit.
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Powerfully penned, Elke. Amazing write my friend, such an authentic piece. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you very much for reading and writing such a kind comment, dear Damien! Highly appreciated!
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Hello Elke. Your writing captures so many emotions. This piece is sad but also lovely. A remarkable write for a remarkable poet/storyteller. xoxo
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So sad to fade…
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. A very lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian