Adel that kicked out of the garden where there is nowhere to go. That is a good line. Enjoyed this piece

Nirvana – Pennyroyal Tea (Live And Loud, Seattle / 1993)

One of my favorites by them – Nirvana – Radio Friendly Unit Shifter (Live And Loud, Seattle / 1993)

This poem is friggin deep. One of your best. There’s so much here that stands out. That rebellion that starts from disappointment or betrayal. It’s like you’re saying – I what? I can’t eat that apple? Get out of the way! Crunch!

I went to a catholic school – first to eigth grade. Imagine my horror when a detective called me one day asking if I was sexually abused there. It turns out many were. I never knew it.

My faith has gone back and forth. I believe, to…Hmm, looking around, I don’t know.

There’s a lot going on in this, but I love it. It stands out. Great work, Adelly.

Every single line felt .. and felt deeply .. no effort required to feel where you are coming from .. and with much respect, much respect & write on, because you do it so well Neville 😎🌻👍

Thanks Damien,
I truly don’t believe there is a wrong religion. As long as it isn’t hurting anyone and feeding your spirit positively.
For me it’s also geographical and cultural. I’m Hispanic and was raised with the Catholic Church so that is what I practiced as a young adult. As I got older I got curious about other religions. And I can thank the late goddess Tina Turner for that. Yes I watched the movie What’s love got to do with it! Lol.
She had a strict Baptist upbringing and later in life embraced Buddhism. It’s inspiring:)
You can always change your mind, even when it comes to something so sacred as religion.

Thanks for stopping by amigo!

It’s interesting to me how the movement of this is similar to a snake, it winds its way down. And those last lines are powerful! I have a complicated relationship with faith. What I’ve resolved as my peace is that I don’t believe in religion but I have a deeply spiritual connection with my faith. Great write!

(What Willow said!)

Hey beautiful. I am in love with your energy, as much as everything else about you. This write is a great example of what you can create from that incredible mind of yours. Hell yes I’m partial! But I’m also smart as hell. I know what is worth my life. You and your talents.
Bravo mi amor.

This was beautiful, deep, and sad. An excellent read. Anyone who has experienced these feelings, knows these words too well. Thank you for sharing.

hello dearest Damian depression is that heavy feeling I really don’t like to write about it but sometimes it’s just there thank you my friend for bearing with me ❤️

Life is not always the way one envisions it.

Powerfully penned, Lizz. A very heavy write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Being trapped and alone with an abusive man must be agony. The only way out is to GET OUT. That kind of isolation and fear needs to be reported.

Nope I don’t talk to much of my brothers and I think I let my closest brother down and what he done for my it put his life on the line so now because of that I’m already getting ready to leave and now summer is coming I don’t mind being on the street for a while.

This is great erotica.

Very well written and a little arousing.
🫦

I loved the her/him perspective.
Erotic FINGERS touch. Erotic TOES curl. “)

Thank you 😊 I do try to do both perspectives and maybe a Duet given it turns out good

Passionately penned, Lizz. Amazing erotica this is a very steamy write my friend. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.

Damian

Chère L.,
The way I read it, is that the erotic part is unmistakably there. And it is wonderful.

But the deeply felt/feld part that is human, is up front.

This is love more than anything else.
What a write!
Truly love it to bits!

Please, keep those poems coming.
Warm regards, Gus

Powerfully penned, Lizz. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian