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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
Not the right time
I wandered into this strange land
The beauty I have discovered
With no one to hold my hand
Only a bag and cloak to coverI did not expect to find
A place to call my own
I moved space and time
Wanting to find a homeThen I met you
My world became so small
All my world views
Mean nothing to me at allIf I…Read More
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Thank you Crimsin. Life is funny this way;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Another excellent write my friend. Your words have a longing to them that gives this poem it’s wind. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Hi
The line i guess I can’t miss something that never occurred. Nice thankful note to someone who loved you and cared for you losing everything.
I have seen one movie veer zhara of India and Pakistan lovers who couldn’t meet for years and they didn’t say like you said they adored each other and lived for each other.
For a person like you it seems you don’t need love or neither the person you just fulfil dam your desire and finish it off.
For a person like me lost hope on love andman thinking person like you who doesn’t dares and cowardly fears of few hounds that cheat for money
Atleast I gave you hope and to many when you sincerely love do it sincerely else you like a flower crushed by people evil desire that evil dead cant hurt you.Jessy Jacob ❤️
I know you will get hurt but I cant ignore for few people who love sincerely and made their life heaven loving each other. My son must also not lose hope on someone he loves. -
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Sorry fia, my head has become few hounds trash throwing whatever they want and provoking me against me to get into trap. What can I say i believed one man till now now he lost interest in achieving his love which is true. He thinks he is not anymore good.
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I am open to get blocked or delete my account i am not going to ask your pardon. This site seems suicidal home that inspires people to die instead of living seeing few hounds crap. I am not liking it anymore.
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This poem is of love. There are those who love and just cannot be together. Whether it be due to distance or obligations. Not all obligations are nefarious. It could be due to taking care of their families due to being the only on to provide because of an illness.
I do not understand your hounds. I write what comes to mind and I do not expect everyone to like it. It is just my thoughts.
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Very well written 👏
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Thank you Liz;))
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You know this kinda makes me think if Mark and I decided to just be pen pals.
All the missed kisses and keeping it safe. I didn’t take this as a death or suicide?
Sometimes we bury how we feel too because we don’t want to wreck our fantasies.
What if it gets ruined and it ends before it even begins!-
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Thank you Adel. That’s what I was hoping people see. Sometimes It’s just not the right time 🩷
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
Silence
Sit in silence
Watch and observe
They tell you things that are unspoken
As they are speakingHidden truths
Covered in a blanket of lie’s
Design to confusePracticed smiles
Paired with dead eyes
You wait…Wait to see what’s the hook
What’s the product
What’s the goalThere is only one purpose
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Read MoreSit in silence Watch and observe They tell you things that are unspoken As they are speaking Hidden truths Covered in a blanket of lie’s Design to confuse Practiced smiles Paired with dead eyes You wait… Wait to see what’s the hook What’s the product What’s the goal There is only one...
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hello lovely Fia very interesting write your right of course I tend to talk too much great wite ❤️
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Thank you Crimsin. I go through times when I am very quiet and I notice things that I normally would not. It’s just a thought that came to me to write about.
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I understand I too quietly observe within myself when I talk too much I am uncomfortable ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write my friend. I think being quiet and observing allows us to see things we normally miss because we’re paying attention instead of talking or communicating. Just my opinion though. lol. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. I agree with that cuz;))
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I don’t think most people are comfortable around others who are silent.Silence scares them because they might have to confront themselves honestly.
I really like this one Fia.
Funny though, even the silent ones sometimes talk too much….but I feel that might be a coping strategy for anxiety.🙏
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It makes them uncomfortable for sure. Thank you Backdeckbenny;))
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I liked this piece Fia. Nice.
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Thank you so much Amethyste;))
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I guess no one would like to be around me because I’m always quite even whether Im around people or alone.
Me I like the silence myself
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There are times I go silent. I just need to think. thank you Lizz:))
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so much longing beautiful Fia I feel you deeply ❤️makes me sad but I understand this…