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    Chaos in Color

    I've got so many sidesinside and outside using chaos as my guideshowing me the waybecause babyI'm everything all encompassing  mixing it uptearing shit upI'll bring my shadesI'll bring my coolI'll bring my teethYou bring the warbecause babyI'm a fucking...

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    • Damn girl this is edgy. Love it.

    • Hey Fia! Thanks chica!
      I was in my feelzzz. Hahaha
      Hey have a great day!

    • Take no prisoners!!! Forget fruits and veggies, bring me pizza and the finest wine!!! ha-ha-ha I’ll expose my kitty from the top of the white house and enjoy every second of it!!! You say stop, use caution? I say gun the motor and rip down the road….lol Grab the apples off the tree of life….I’ll eat every one….She’s ours lads and no one’s left to tell. ha-ha-ha.

      • Dude! You made my evening with your comment. Hahaha
        I wanted to write something different and edgy and I wanted to cuss. lol
        It’s fun to let loose and just go with it and see where it goes.
        And hell yeah, take no prisoners! Rrraaarrrrr.

        Hahaha you are too freaking cool amigo!
        Rock on!

    • hello beautiful Adelphina I can feel your fire here lovely lady…you are lovely no matter what light you’re bringing but this is really you ❤️

      • Hi Crimsin:)

        Well thank you. I woke up and had that phrase in my head, Chaos in Color and wanted to
        explore what I thought it looked and felt like. Turns out it feels pretty bad ass. Haha

        I’m so happy you are here on Starsrite. Truly.
        You have inspired a lot of my writes on DUP and here.

        Thanks for stopping by!

    • Is someone just a little fired up? Kinda crazy we are doing this while watching each other on facetime. LOL. I keep sneaking peeks at ya! I can’t think of anything to say, just things to do!
      We are way too goofy. But I love it.
      Anyway hotstuff, what a fuego write! I’m in a devouring mood!
      April 29th!

      • Hey big sexy!
        Yes, I woke up in a mood! Hahaha
        After we got off FaceTime I started this write.

        You’re so cute in your glasses typing away. Hehehe
        And I keep peeking at you too!

        I can’t wait to be
        face to face
        flesh to flesh
        All that stuff that comes with you and me together in the same space:)
        Love ya babe

    • (I have to tighten up the headboard before you get back. We are killing it! What!)

    • Hell yeah, girl! Get it! 🔥
      ❤️k

      • Hi TK!

        It’s so awesome to see you on my page!
        How have you been!

        Yes, I was in a mood hahaha

        Thanks for your snaps on my write amiga:)

    • Powerfully penned, Adel. Excellent write with a lot of fire my friend. Amazing flow with a lyrical vibe, makes sense being you’re listening to music. I know I’m not alone now, I write while listening to music as well. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Hi Damien!

        Nope you are not alone! For me music opens doors in my mind when I’m writing.
        It really does. It brings different tones or vibes to my write. Hope that makes sense:)
        And please know I appreciate you too!

        Thanks for stopping by!

    • Talk about a cataclysmic write! I bet this was fun to capture! 🙌

      • Hi Willow.

        It was fun. Sometimes when writing it’s also just as important to catch our adrenaline too.
        My pulse was pumping with this write. Hahaha
        Hope that makes sense!

        Thanks for stopping by!

    • Dear A,

      Chaos in color. Sounds like my closet and then my brain. But mostly my closet. My brain is largely grey matter. I’m off topic hang on…I’m back- I’m a fucking carnivore too! Shred it sister. I really dug this because it is edgy and it is raw. And it makes me want to ditch convention and just be feisty. Fabulous.
      Just fabulous. H 🌷

      • Hi H!

        I would love to see your closet, I’m intrigued now. Haha
        And I have seen your brain!
        It’s a beautiful brain- you are an awesome writer- don’t forget that!
        You should have a little spice daily chica.
        At least one little teaspoon a day, just like honey. It’s good for your soul. Trust me!
        I’m so happy to see ya on my page sister!

        Love ya and miss ya!

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    me and Him

    infinite dark beheld mewhile humming a tune he sung over mehappily creating a new fascinationsomeday I would be a companionutterly charmed by himhe sang of grace and commitmentgrowing me from nothing but dustenveloped in His womb I grewfrom nothing...

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    • Some people grow with an appreciation for their maker, and others drift through life. Good one, and a lovely photo. 🙂

      • hello dearest Tim good morning I grew in appreciation when I started to hear him myself not when people at the church told me what he was saying and I never found him I found while contemplating on nature thank you so much for the lovely comment ❤️

    • The becoming is a beautiful thing, Brenda. This one made me smile 😊🧡

    • hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️

    • I love how this whole piece is written. From beginning to being continued!
      As people I feel we continue to evolve.
      Even when we aren’t looking.
      Awesome write!

      • hello beautiful Adelphina thank you graciously I believe it too we are in a constant state of evoluion and growth no matter how many lives we have you can witness it in old souls and those you can tell are here for the first time…I deeply appreciate you sharing ❤️

    • Dear B,

      For me, the presence of one’s higher power guiding us when we’re willing to receive is pulsating throughout this write. I kept thinking throughout my life whenever I wanted to do something differently but was spiritually guided in a different direction…typically I was grateful it didn’t happen the way I wished. Your piece of growth and gratitude is ever present in this write and your accompanying picture is beautiful. H xx 🌷

      • hello beautiful Honoria good afternoon I’m very grateful to be led and know I”m not alone I didn’t always know that and it was scary… I’m happy you have felt that guiding spirit as well thank you graciously for the love have a beautiful day ❤️

  • Reach out

    There are things I wanted to show
    There are things I could not let go
    When my light is finally out
    I’m in the shadow

    Reach out , reach out
    You’re in my heart
    Reach out
    Whenever you feel you’re falling apart
    Reach out
    I will always be there for you….

    I’m here for you
    You’re never alone, its true
    Wherever I am is a hom…Read More

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    • I really like, it sounds like a song. To not give up or reminding someone that they aren’t alone but you are there. Nice write keep it up.

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    Reach Out

    There are things I wanted to showThere are things I could not let goWhen my light is finally outI’m in the shadow   Reach out , reach out You’re in my heart Reach out Whenever you feel  you’re falling apart Reach out I will always be...

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    at my behest

    speaking in metaphor I impore youlust coveted cannot ignitewhat already smolders under the surfacedecadent grim to behold your likeness but not to touchsinister need, to reach indeep into your soulshadows cower and the moon grows boldwith looks of seduction,...

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    • Initially I get the feeling of a horror movie, as though Vincent Price were inviting us into his own darkness. By the end though it feels more hellish. More sinister, and more serious. This is a dark one Crimsin.

      • hello dearest Tim I know this is foreboding really I don’t know where the words come from I don’t stifle them or I get blocked thank you for commenting on the darkened offering ❤️

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. An excellent write with many layers my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • I haven’t read something that made me feel, “Wow, I feel EXACTLY like this to someone right now, nothing good could come of it, I don’t understand why I’d even draw them to me, I’ve nothing to offer, just darkness, and they’re made of light, so I’d blot them out.” This was like reading the words of my own heart, like, why, my friend, when you’re so, sooo high above me in every way would you ever want to drown in my bipolar type ii complex PTSD pit of despair! Don’t want me out of pity, you’ll regret it, and how will you ever find the Mr. Right you so deserve when you’re spending all your time and energy on the Mr. Wrong that I am?? Oh, gosh, did this ever hit me right in my chest… an amazing write, Crimsin. I feel like you snuck up to my metaphorical house and peeked in the window and saw EVERYTHING that is going on!! Crazy, but in the best sort of way!!!

      • hello dearest poet it’s funny the things I write about this I feel I’m bi polar and dark as well…I don’t know why anyone would be drawn to me it is heavy of feeling around me and I feel things deeply…I hope it works out with your interest…thank you graciously for reading me and sharing with me ❤️

        • It was definitely my gain, it made me feel understood when since I’ve been back in Canada from Polska, and before that Ukrayina, I’ve felt the very antithesis of understood. I would never wish ill (of course!!) on anyone, but if it is any consolation, your pain became my gain. My friend and I wrote a joint-poem considering things back and forth and forth and back. I’m meeting her in Halifax on Friday for a week, so I guess maybe we’ll see or maybe it will go back to this ball of confusion by the 24th again. Thank you for you good wishes for me, for us. I’m glad you don’t mind me spilling me guts on your poem, but it just engaged me emotionally SO much my filter and and any shyness just melted clean away off of me, you know? I’m so glad you commented on my poem today, and accepted my friend’s request, too. Yesterday and tomorrow are anniversaries most grim, but you made today a good day sandwiched between them, thank you, you are a gem to me.

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