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Crimsin wrote a new post

• 1 year, 5 months ago

amuck

Poetry, Romance

April 15, 2025

8

my thoughts crash into you with a great ache of rejectionmy face turned towards yours, you look awayassaulted vision, you with someone elsemy sacred vault spill outmy vulnerability on displaywords tumble from my lipsones of hurt and sadnessuntil it...

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8 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Brenda, you have this talent to bring us into that headspace of hurt and longing. Nicely done
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 5 months ago
    
    hello lovely Fia sadly this is kind of true story…I deeply appreciate your thoughts and thank you graciously 💕
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Superb work.
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 5 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Thomas 💕
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  As always Brenda, you’re an amazing, very diverse writer. You could do anything. xo
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 5 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Keith 💕
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Powerful write, Brenda. Great read. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 5 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Damian I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
Crimsin wrote a new post

• 1 year, 5 months ago

little tree

Poetry

April 15, 2025

6

My thoughts worry I don't feel good todayMy nerves are on edge, and my soul feels rankledIt's a beautiful sunny day, and I can't get in tuneIt just makes my foul mood stark in comparisonAlcatraz, except my prison is...

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6 Comments
- NAAJIR
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Love this. Trees speak to my spirit as well. A reliable grounding force.
  I dug this vibe thru and thru. Thx for posting, Brenda
  It’s a good start for an ordinary Tuesday
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 5 months ago
    
    hello dearest Naajir thank you for feeling me on this write yes trees with their stoic knowledge calm I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Powerful and poignant. Tremendous work.
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 5 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Thomas I appreciate your thoughts 💕
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Nature helps so much more with our issues then medicine or people trying to figure out our problems. I’ll see you in the woods my friend. Love this poem. xo
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 5 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Keith I love nature 💕
DampKitten wrote a new post

• 1 year, 5 months ago

Cashmere

Poetry, Romance

April 14, 2025

11

My love is wornlike cashmere sweatersflowery thornssoft studded leathercandy lips with razor teethgentle hips and burning sheathslip me on and feel the passionwear me out… your latest fashionpainful pleasure; cruel and kindcashmere cadence; bump and grind

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8 Comments
- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  I’m glad I befriended you….nice observational piece….oh to be a cashmere sweater now that spring is here.
  - DampKitten
    1 year, 5 months ago
    
    I’m glad you befriended me too! It’s good weather to take off your sweater!
- Poetspeak
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  A little bit of rhyme is kind and sublime and stirs the mind….
  You always deliver dk …
  
  BIG LIKE
  - DampKitten
    1 year, 5 months ago
    
    I’m so glad you like this! Thanks for your poetic reply. I still think about your toys…
- DampKitten
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  I’ll be your humper…
- DampKitten
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  And I know you’re not an idiot…
  I’m having so much fun thinking about you at night
- DampKitten
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  I bet I fit you nicely
- DampKitten
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Such a vision
DampKitten wrote a new post

• 1 year, 5 months ago

The Kraken

Poetry, Romance

April 14, 2025

10

You have releasedthe Kraken.The mighty eye opens,thrusting to the swelling surface.I come for you in waves,fists strapped to the starboard bow.Your tentacles are drapedlike twisted sea dreadsswaying across your varnished shoulders.I am the captain’s daughter.You are the mutiny of...

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7 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  You come up with fantastic imagery
  - DampKitten
    1 year, 5 months ago
    
    Thanks, girl! I like the ocean. I was a pirate in another life.
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  You nailed it.
  - DampKitten
    1 year, 5 months ago
    
    I’m glad you think so, Thomas. Thank you!
- DampKitten
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Yeah, well… one of my fantasy creations… if you’d like to saddle up! Thank you for reading, Adagio!
- DampKitten
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  LOL. Is that a motherly mmm hmmm or someone with a naughty mind?
- DampKitten
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  I’m glad you didn’t drown, baby. I have plans to smother you.
Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 1 year, 5 months ago

Fia's Frankenstein Experience

Poetry

April 14, 2025

11

This is my masterpieceI have poured my heart and soul into this I must hand this in The pounding in my chest will not cease Every metaphorEvery juxtapositionWas executed with A precise description She is going to hate it.That witch of...

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11 Comments
- Nick DC
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  I like the innocents to this. Great ink, friend.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 5 months ago
    
    Thank you, Nick. It is hard to see your work handed back with red marks on it.
- Nick DC
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Haha, well that was most of my school life back in the days.
- Crimsin
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Fia you showed her you are a masterful writer to bad she didn’t encourage that probably jealousy 💕
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 5 months ago
    
    Thank you, Brenda
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Tremendous work.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 5 months ago
    
    Thank you, Thomas
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Fia. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 5 months ago
    
    Thank you, Damian
- M.E
  6 months ago
  
  I don’t know how I missed this one.
  Each line she “corrected” with her red pen will echo: It’s Alive, Fia. “)
  - Fia Naturie
    6 months ago
    
    Thank you, M.E
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