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Read MoreThe music screams into her ears Drowning out any thoughts she might have had hiding in her head It was autumn And it was beautiful With the leaves swirling around A multicolored chaos against her green hoodie But today, the sun was hiding And the wind was...
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Hoi hoi
A very nice and elegant work of art you’ve made here.
Like it a lot, but two thumbs is not possible.
Kind regards, Gus
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Read MoreLast night He came home and He laughed And it was like Nothing was different And I wasn’t afraid For 30 seconds I wasn’t afraid Because he laughed And I love his laugh Because it sounds like Everything is alright
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Hoi hoi
Love your poem.
Did you draw this one yourself? In one go, without lifting your pen?
That impresses me very much!
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No unfortunately I am not anywhere near that good of an artist
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Superb work.
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Beautifully penned, Green. Into the book it belongs! This one pulled at these old heartstrings my friend. Amazing write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreIt starts off full and swelling bursting at the seams as if it will engulf the world in its beauty Slowly, ever so slowlyIt begins to disappearAnd shadow creeps in I secretly prayed for it to stay To embrace me in its warmthMy prayers...
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A good write! I loved your moon analogy. “)
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Thank you, Me;))
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When we’re linked to the moon’s tides…it can get overwhelming. I’m a full-on moon child myself, I get it
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Thank you, Willow;))
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I loved how visual this was, but also in a very subtle way. I could see the sort of waxing and waning pattern but at the same time we weren’t talking about a literal moon, so it was a weird kind of take this very visual thing and make it into a feeling. And then it’s all wrapped up in really beautiful language.
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Thank you, Green;))
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The other morning, I was in a very sexual dream. it was intense! And then my alarm went off and scared the absolute hell outta me. Talk about a rip-off!
Your words reminded me of my own misfortune. LOL
I hope that there is success from your dilemma soon!-
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I was looking out the window at the moon and my mind just went with it. Thank you, Styxian ;))
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An excellent metaphorical take, Fia. Love it.
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Thank you, Tim;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian:))
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The ebb and flow of the man/woman dynamic.
I digs this
Much respect
Naaj
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Thank you, Naaj;))
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Superb work.
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Read MoreDear _______, I am just a VOICE inside your head as you read this letter. That's all I am. You can try to read it like you think I would. Putting all the inflections where I would. Trying to give it that 'thing' that was distinctly me. But it doesn't fit...
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Powerfully penned, Green. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerful work. Tremendous.
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I’ve seen that scream before….great little write.🙏