Powerfully penned, Alexandria. Excellent write my friend, love the layers in this. Appreciate you.

Damian

Brava! That last stanza blew my mind!

This screams with such a powerful quiet strength and says so much with a surprisingly few amount of words.

Superb work.

Always remember. It takes strength to be gentle and kind.

More please! I understand this well. Slight empath – had to be able to read a room to survive. I can feel the hate and the love and ALWAYS know when to leave.

This poem makes me think of several things at once. A relationship in which one partner tries to dominate. The other wants an equal split or a literal split.
In a house, the rule has to be balanced. A back and forth, not all take and no give.

But this also can relate to the current political situation. The one seeking power and crush all in his way. We don’t want to be ruled like that from that house, either.
This is good stuff…Opening the doors to varied interpretations allows readers to see what they will for themselves. And that is good poetry.
j.

We’re moving in the same direction S …
Fear not
You’ll know when it’s right
Ok ?

Chère A.,
Hope this finds you well?!

Over here it is 7 in the morning and I played our coop on earphones.
We’re trekking again.

This beautiful poem of your slipped through the cracks. I’m really sorry for that.

Cause I remembered your remark of you being on StarsRite too.
I was brought up with the ‘if a girl says no, she means no’ principle. So, if you want to write only one poem, I have to settle for that.

But I hope that I can lure you to write a poem again!

Our coop drew 4.685 listeners* so far, so may I hope for another one? In NL*
Anyway, I wish you a beautiful Sunday.
Warm regards, Gus

OMG…. This is one of your very very best

Absolutely love the flow of this piece! It is reminiscent of the legends of old. Stellar write, my friend.

Clay

Nicely done Fia…

Powerful excursion…

<#3 Cipher

Lyrical and thoughtful. It has, for me, a distinctive Autumnal feel to it.

Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Incredible flow, it has a lyrical vibe. Excellent write, cuz. This is next level great. Appreciate you.

Damian

A nice one Fia. Sentiments and feelings should be created with positive thoughts in mind.

This feels a bit like an invocation, a psalm. Almost spiritual in its expression. Just…wow

This has a very Poe vibe. Has layers and takes a bit of thought.

Wonderful ink.

Exquisitely poemed my friend .. Neville 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍

Sounds like a bit more than ‘romantic’…😜

Oh! This is very good, Brenda.

I drift, happily, into the dripping honey spaces unafraid of the liquids,preexisting and resulting.
Thanks for the respite. ❣💞💦💞

hello dearest HJ I truly appreciate the lovely comment thank you 💕

Powerful. You paint this scene well.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Such amazing imagery my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Hauntingly gorgeous. Your emotions ripen through the act and feeling of love into a rose blossoming of desire and passion. I enjoyed this thoroughly. You have the gift of putting passion into a poem of great resonance and deeply seductive all entwined. This is great poetry. And I loved reading this tonight.

John

Crimsin, everything you write is so deep. This is painfully beautiful.
Remember, “For His anger endureth but a moment, but Joy cometh in the morning”
You are loved.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Brenda, you have a gift of taking even your suffering and making great art. This speaks to me of a soul hurting but also a talent that is unmistakably the source of true art. You are more than worthy to God I am sure. And not a selfish person.

John

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Outstanding my friend. You take passion and love for this one person and enshrine it into a poem as divine as it is beautiful.

John