This has a surreal aspect to it. The iron tasting like memory is brilliant. Mind sees blood

Brilliantly penned, Drieks. Into the book it belongs! Phenomenal lyrics my friend especially that chorus, love the drive of the musical arrangement, the beat is almost trance like. Excellent work. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you Damian! 🙏🏻

This is awesome! I’m sorry I’m late to this post!!
Just wow!!

I can’t thank you enough for your beautiful words. I am pretty bad at accepting compliments so bare with me.
Also, english is not my native language so if I say something that doesn’t make much sense, I apologize!

But thank you for saying all this to me. Truly.
And no, I do not realize I help people through my words but it is really nice to think I can/do.

❤️

What depravity does the rip tide take you to..

This is a good write which understands the power of lust.
😜

Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Lust is a beast! You wove this one with a silken hand, Brenda. That ending was about dead on perfect 🧡

Crimsin, this is fantastic! You weave this emotional tour de force into a poem of great seductiveness. You make an emotionally sensual poem of the highest order here. I could feel the rip tide through you words. And the ending couldn’t have been better. Truly a resolution to surpass them all. Loved this all the way.

John

Powerfully penned, Alexandria. Excellent write my friend, love the layers in this. Appreciate you.

Damian

Brava! That last stanza blew my mind!

This screams with such a powerful quiet strength and says so much with a surprisingly few amount of words.

Superb work.

Always remember. It takes strength to be gentle and kind.

More please! I understand this well. Slight empath – had to be able to read a room to survive. I can feel the hate and the love and ALWAYS know when to leave.

This poem makes me think of several things at once. A relationship in which one partner tries to dominate. The other wants an equal split or a literal split.
In a house, the rule has to be balanced. A back and forth, not all take and no give.

But this also can relate to the current political situation. The one seeking power and crush all in his way. We don’t want to be ruled like that from that house, either.
This is good stuff…Opening the doors to varied interpretations allows readers to see what they will for themselves. And that is good poetry.
j.

We’re moving in the same direction S …
Fear not
You’ll know when it’s right
Ok ?

Chère A.,
Hope this finds you well?!

Over here it is 7 in the morning and I played our coop on earphones.
We’re trekking again.

This beautiful poem of your slipped through the cracks. I’m really sorry for that.

Cause I remembered your remark of you being on StarsRite too.
I was brought up with the ‘if a girl says no, she means no’ principle. So, if you want to write only one poem, I have to settle for that.

But I hope that I can lure you to write a poem again!

Our coop drew 4.685 listeners* so far, so may I hope for another one? In NL*
Anyway, I wish you a beautiful Sunday.
Warm regards, Gus

OMG…. This is one of your very very best

Absolutely love the flow of this piece! It is reminiscent of the legends of old. Stellar write, my friend.

Clay

Nicely done Fia…

Powerful excursion…

<#3 Cipher

Lyrical and thoughtful. It has, for me, a distinctive Autumnal feel to it.

Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Incredible flow, it has a lyrical vibe. Excellent write, cuz. This is next level great. Appreciate you.

Damian

A nice one Fia. Sentiments and feelings should be created with positive thoughts in mind.

This feels a bit like an invocation, a psalm. Almost spiritual in its expression. Just…wow

This has a very Poe vibe. Has layers and takes a bit of thought.

Wonderful ink.

Exquisitely poemed my friend .. Neville 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍